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Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from falsegod
Review:
wow pretty good, you should do a sequel
Review By [falsegod] • Date [16 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from heyu
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Any chance for a sequel?

Please keep writing!
Review By [heyu] • Date [3 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from malchance
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This story is great. I hope you have plans for a sequel. This would make an awsome CSI:Miami crossover. Abby would be perfect for a relationship with Speed. Also, I would love to read how Xander's relationship develops with Gibbs and Tony.
Review By [malchance] • Date [8 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from kaleecat
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I've lost track of how many times I've re-read this story; and every time I still feel the emotion as if it is the first time. It still hits the same way, making my heart ache for Xander, then cry when he tries to be noble. I still have to groan at the fake names Abby comes up with since none of them are are actually 'blending in' names. I know a different author wrote a sort-of sequel, but I really hope that someday you return to this universe.
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [4 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from kweandee
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Cool story :)
Review By [kweandee] • Date [22 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from nchakra
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I have just re-read this story and wanted to say that I love it. It is one of my favourites. Any chance of a sequel, please please please .
Review By [nchakra] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from HeatherKat
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I love this story! There is enough angst and heartache with out it being over the top :-) You wrapped the current situation up so nicely but I was wondering, do you ever plan on revisiting and doing a sequel or showing the reactions of the Scoobies to the death of Xander? It's a great story with an interesting plotline. Excellent work. Best wishes and happy writing!
Review By [HeatherKat] • Date [29 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from legstanner
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I really liked this story. thanks for writing it.
Review By [legstanner] • Date [16 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from greysh
Review:
Great fic! I loved it :)
Review By [greysh] • Date [1 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from slytherinwithwings
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I could see a sequel to this being a csi miami crossover...or dexter. no need to bring the scoobs into it at all. oh well, something to fantasize about.
Review By [slytherinwithwings] • Date [17 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from firedrakegirl
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You should write a sequel!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [16 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from (Past Donor)Dianasis
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But......I wanted to see the scoobies reaction! [pouty-face]

Pretty Please?!?

Awesome story by the way. Did you spend some time in a wheel chair? I was in one for a couple months and you wrote it very accurately.
Review By [(Past Donor)Dianasis] • Date [31 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from jgoodman
Review:
good story
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [21 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from DarkFaerieYumi
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This was wonderful. I loved it. *gushes*
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [28 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from AXanFan
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I read and reviewed this story back in February -- liked it then and like it now that I re-read it. I'm pretty sure I read and reviewed it on another web-site where I got a little picky about the bombing -- now that I've read it again I still have to say that there should have been a more convincing way to do that.

Obviously Xander did not live at that house -- at least not long so it is highly unlikely he would be getting any mail -- add the fact that the bad guys know he is hiding out and know that Gibbs and Tony are somehow involved -- add that Tony and especially Gibbs are agents on alert for threats and there is no way that they would take an unknown package from that mailman and give it to Xander or take it into the house. Besides -- the bad guys know they did not blow them up -- who else is supposed to be after Xander? Seems a accident due to a gas leak, while not common would be more likely.

Sorry, but that bugged me -- that aside I like the groundwork you've laid for this story. You have written all the characters in a believable way -- and that is easier said than done -- Good Work. I like that Angel and Spike are involved -- it does make sense that he would go to Angel to help -- he is upset with the other Scoobies, but mostly he feels he should stay away to protect them.

I am surprised that Gibbs is accepting all the supernatural stuff so easily, but maybe it all comes down to seeing is believing; plus he does care for Xander so believes him.

I've never watched CSI Miami so I don't care if they ever enter the story, but I would like to read more of what their future holds. Know it has been a while, but hope you plan to write more. Thanks!!!
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [6 Nov 09] • Not Rated
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