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Review of chapter "December Flower" from Elwing
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Wow I didn't think I would like this tale but I'm happy to say it grabbed me by the throat and didn't let go until it was done. You said at the end that you had written one chapter in the connected piece have you had a chance to post it anywhere? I would be really be interested in reading it!!!
Review By [Elwing] • Date [26 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "December Flower" from missLehane
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More! Please, please give us more!

I can't wait to find out what happens :-)
Review By [missLehane] • Date [18 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "December Flower" from (Past Donor)Lupo
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No wonder most vampires go crazy after having to go through that kind of torment when they're turned. With Faith being a vampire I guess the fun will really start now. How's Bella going to feel with Faith getting what Bella wanted?

Please post again soon, Can't wait to see more.

See ya.................
Review By [(Past Donor)Lupo] • Date [6 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blame" from (Past Donor)Lupo
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Don't know why but I haven't been getting update notification on this. I just happened to see it on the latest posting page.

Still very interestd in this story. Are you going to have Faith change? That might be the catalyst to drive her personality more towards who she was in canon. It would also make it interesting when she goes to Sunnydale and meets up with Buffy. If that's where you're headed.

Can't wait for more. Please keep them coming.

See ya...........
Review By [(Past Donor)Lupo] • Date [1 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Victoria Pt 1" from (Past Donor)Lupo
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I caught Twilight the other night. From the movie, I wouldn't have picked Jasper as Faith's partner. The way you portray him though, I could see it happen.

Thanks for writing.

See ya............
Comments from author:
Jasper is pretty much a "non-character" in the movie. In the books he is much better developed.
Review By [(Past Donor)Lupo] • Date [24 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Uninvited Guests Pt 2" from (Past Donor)Lupo
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So they're prepping for the big battle,huh. The idea of using Belle's blood instead of her being there is a good one, though it seems if everyone else is at the battle she would be an open target for kidnapping. This is about the time in most stories where something dramatic would happen to Faith to bring out her dark side. I'd like to see her a little darker than what's portrayed here. I guess since she hadn't gone through the trauma of watching her watcher get killed, it left some of the softness in her.

Nice update. I can't wait to read the battle scene.

See ya.........
Review By [(Past Donor)Lupo] • Date [20 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Seattle Pt 2" from (Past Donor)Lupo
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The action scenes are not bad at all. As far as the love scene, this Faith is much more reserved than in canon. Not necessarily a bad thing, just different.

Please post soon....................
Comments from author:
Well since this is her first experience with a man since being abused...I thought she'd be the seducee rather than the seducer. :) Thanks for the comment on the fight scenes, I do struggle with them!
Review By [(Past Donor)Lupo] • Date [20 Feb 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Seattle Pt 1" from (Past Donor)Lupo
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Nice!!! I like it when Faith jumps into a fight on impulse. Impulsive Faith is of the good. I hope Jasper starts getting with the program. If he doesn't Faith'll end up getting bored and leave him.

Please keep posting........
Review By [(Past Donor)Lupo] • Date [10 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sick Day" from Nomma
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Veeeeery nice.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Nomma] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sick Day" from (Past Donor)Lupo
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And the plot thickens. I kinda like seeing the softer side of Faith as she falls for a vampire. Something she swore in canon she would rather die than do.

I like the way you're developing the relationships here. Please keep posting..............
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [(Past Donor)Lupo] • Date [28 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sick Day" from TeamB
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Cool story. I'd never thought of Jazz and Faith as a couple before this story. I really like the pairing. You've done a really good job with them. I can't wait for the next update.
Comments from author:
Thanks so much *smiles* I am working hard on the next chapters.
Review By [TeamB] • Date [26 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nightmares" from (Past Donor)Lupo
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Excellent update. You did a very good job getting Faith's pain and self-loathing across in this chapter. I'm sure that Jasper could find the supposed step-dad with a little ingenuity. I hope he does........

Thanks for writing and please keep posting.
Comments from author:
It was a hard chapter to write, but I am pretty pleased with how it worked out.
Review By [(Past Donor)Lupo] • Date [21 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Piano" from chaosrulerofall
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this story is really intresting with jasper interacting with faith kind of like edward with bella in the book. can't wait to find out what caused the scars and everything and how jasper and faith progress. please update love this story
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for the positive feedback. The next chapter is with my beta right now :)
Review By [chaosrulerofall] • Date [17 Jan 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Piano" from (Past Donor)Lupo
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I'm not familiar with the "Twilight" universe, but I'll read pretty much anything Faith related. This story is a little hard to follow for me because of that. This seems to be a softer Faith than is normally portrayed, maybe because her Watcher wasn't killed in front of her? How does Faith know Buffy and Buffy about Faith? It will be interesting to see where you take this.
Comments from author:
Buffy is still a Slayer and their Watchers know each other...so as Faith says she 'knows of' Buffy. [at this point at least]. Thank you for reviewing! In the book 'Go Ask Malice' Faith & Professor Dormer have a really good relationship started and I am trying to build on that. What would Faith have been like if she had a Watcher that understood her and put her first?
Review By [(Past Donor)Lupo] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Piano" from nickydee
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I really really enjoy this story. Faith is one of my favorite characters and it's refreshing to see her as a centerpoint in stories. While I love Alice and Jasper together, I really do enjoy seeing her with Jasper. I'm very excited to see how their relationship develops especially if there's any crossing over with Buffy & Alice. Can't wait for the next update!
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for the positive response. I am struggling with the Alice/Buffy aspect - part of me really wants to do a few chapters. If you have any suggestions I'd be happy to use them and credit you accordingly!
Review By [nickydee] • Date [8 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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