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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from winnie
Review:
Wish that there was more of the story, but it is gooda and I am looking forward to more soon, please.
Review By [winnie] • Date [15 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kanikan
Review:
Interesting beginning, the one thing that I noticed as off where the dates in the story. You have Harry being 9 in 2001 and coinciding with Buffy Season 1, however in the story itself you had Harry being born in 1980. I don't know if this is something that will be mentioned later on, if Harry is somehow frozen in time and then wakes up a decade later, or if you just didn't realize the dates where incorrect. In any case, looking forward to seeing where you go with this.


~In response to Author's Comments:

It still makes no sense though, going by the dates you've given, you want Harry to be 9 at the beginning of Buffy season 1, which you placed as taking place in 2001. Yet in the story you said Harry was born in 1980, which would then make him 21 in 2001. Sorry, I might be missing something or just being incredibly obtuse.
Comments from author:
That's deliberate, i wanted Harry younger than the main Buffy group because i wanted the new Watcher's Council to be established when Harry finally went up against Voldemort but i still wanted Harry at Hogwarts age
Review By [kanikan] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheLaughingMan
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I am so glad that you posted this here. Was it my advice or did you just decide to do it on your own?

Well, I'm glad you posted here. You won't be disappointed. By the way the best time to update is at around 4 o'clock. Cheers.
Comments from author:
Your advice, I've read stories hear before but never really considered posting them
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Wormbait
Review:
Interesting start, need sleep before I tackle the rest but I'm looking forward to it.

Both a long and broad sword are onehanded.

Nicely done and thanks for sharing.

(Would say more but need sleep)
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [9 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
Review:
Huh...I don't think that dealing with Travers will be such a good thing for young Harry. He's as manipulative and controlling as Dumbledore. Giles should be able to help mitigate that though. During the series, Giles went from obedient, to questioning, then to doing what was right for his charge (Buffy) no matter what the cost to himself.. Giles has enough discipline to deal with a powerful charge, and is enough of Ripper to handle any rebellion from said child. I look forward to a Harry raised by Rupert 'Ripper' Giles. When he deals with the wizarding worl, it won't be from the standpoint of a manipulated and awestruck child,
Review By [kayron] • Date [9 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
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A HP friends with Giles & Buffy etc, but who strongly dislikes the entire wizarding world, would be real interesting once Voldemort returns. Even assuming V. doesn't make it back in "book 1 or 2" ie Dumbledore probably could have stopped Quirrell easily himself, maybe same with Chamber of Secrets (one gets the impression he regarded those as training for HP) --eventually Tom is back, and HP has to fight him... I could see an Hermione who never made any friends and is very closed off, stuff like that...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [9 Jan 09] • Not Rated
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