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Review of chapter "Prologue" from sistercity
Review:
Just started reading this and its not bad, though a little rough here and there.

See you still haven't fixed the error in the prologue about the thestrals that mithralandtj mentioned to you in January. When you don't have a beta, reviews can be used for that function. Just remember to go and fix the problem.
Review By [sistercity] • Date [6 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Interesting start. I like it.

BTW (and saw a horseless carriage waiting for them)
ALL of the Buffy/Angel people would see the thestrals pulling the carriages

They have all seen death (which is the prerequisite to see the 'horse')
Comments from author:
damnit, this is WHY I need a beta badly. Just when one thinks they get all the details *shakes head*
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [9 Jan 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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