Review of chapter "Zero Sum Game" from wolframhart
Just finished re-reading this series. I enjoyed it as much as I did years ago. I hope you return to it someday. I realize with Dawn becoming so powerful it might be difficult. Would the Key want to let Dawn grow old and die or keep her young forever to continue to experience the material world?
Review By [wolframhart
] • Date [19 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Zero Sum Game" from Vickzie
Review By [Vickzie
] • Date [25 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Zero Sum Game" from jgoodman
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Review By [jgoodman
] • Date [17 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Zero Sum Game" from BrownFinderth
I do so with that DonSample had continued with this series!!
Review By [BrownFinderth
] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Zero Sum Game" from vladt
the entire series is a fantastic read, thank you.
Review By [vladt
] • Date [14 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Zero Sum Game" from TwoBlackDragons
Evil Author\Muse = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a terrific story, so please stop being one of the Evilest of Authors\Muses.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons
] • Date [1 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Zero Sum Game" from Rune
Love the ending!
Now is Dawn Immortal? What about children? Does she want any? Will she have any? And what would they really be? Human? Meta-Human? Mini-keys?
Dawn is a Goddess and a Creator, as the Key she nurtured life. Creators don't like destroying, so Dawn does not like the idea of eliminating the Wraiths.
She is running into the problem of Free Will. With Free Will a Being can chose evil, but good and evil are also need for Free Will to exist. There is no Free Will if there is only one thing to chose.
I'll go back sometime and review the other stories in the series too.
Review By [Rune
] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Zero Sum Game" from JaCee
I think I like this one even better than To Be or Not to Be!
Excellent series, and hope to see more soon. That's saying something, since I don't usually like Dawn-centric stories.
Review By [JaCee
] • Date [31 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Zero Sum Game" from LadyParadox
I really love this series, thanks so much for writing it!
Review By [LadyParadox
] • Date [18 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Zero Sum Game" from spk
WOW! Inspiring conversation between Dawn & Phillips. Amazing job at understanding and conveying your character's thoughts & feelings. :)
Review By [spk
] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Zero Sum Game" from RevDorothyL
Really interesting to see Dawn-fully-aware-of-being-the-Key trying to cope with the ethical implications of her choices, in the interests of preserving a diversity of life (including humans, and -- if possible -- some form of Wraith).
Review By [RevDorothyL
] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Zero Sum Game" from MarcusRowland
Some disturbing echoes of Dr. Manhattan there, hopefully Phillips will help to keep her a little more grounded. Although if she starts to float around naked I'm not necessarily complaining...
Comments from author:
The Watchmen DVD has been sitting at the top of my "to be watched" pile for a while now...
Having finally gotten around to watching "Watchmen"...Dr. Manhatten is a piker, compared to the Key, and I think that Dawn has much better grasp on her humanity than John does.
Review By [MarcusRowland
] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wraith" from tryingtobestine
This series was so much more interesting than I thought it be... I loved it and I want more... how will Joe handle everything?
Review By [tryingtobestine
] • Date [19 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wraith" from borgrabbit
Found this series a couple of days ago. You are a most excellent writer and have my utmost respect and admiration. The only thing preventing a ten of ten rating has been the shortness of some of the recent chapters. I know this last has been 'vignettes' but it would be nice to see an expanded version of Dawn's help to SGC. I hope its not muse burn-out, cause I've enjoyed your stories way too much for it to be legal.☺
Review By [borgrabbit
] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wraith" from ebony
Review By [ebony
] • Date [8 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]