Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Hee! If Dawn has to resort to the "Jack defense", she's really desperate!
Review By [RevDorothyL
] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
It doesn't affect the story, but are you sure you meant 32? As I recall, Dawn was "born" in 1986. That would put the story in 2018.
Comments from author:
Well... sure. It doesn't really matter. Could be future, or could be AU. I think I was 3 shots into New Year's Eve when I wrote that part, lol.
Review By [djhardim
] • Date [12 Jan 09] • Not Rated