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Xander Harris: Bad-Ass Wicca?

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Review of chapter "Time For The End" from SpacedCadet
Review:
I'm glad I found this story!

Lots of fun.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Was Travers Thinking?" from Downery
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Great story so far. Didn't really enjoy the emo-ness.... skipped most of it in fact. Felt to much like a angst ridden teen listen to emo music and cutting himself, so pathetic you don't want to watch.

Overall great. Just hated the chapter.
Review By [Downery] • Date [24 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Of Curses, Changes, and Charmed Ones" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Your characterizations are very off, mostly in regards to Xander. Or, if you're going to write him out of character then I suggest writing a bit more descriptive explanation so the reader can get into the character's head a bit more.

Good luck with your story.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [26 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Well... This took a strange turn somewhere" from FatherAndSonGrimm
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I was actually liking this story until this chapter. Xander would never do this stuff to another human.
1.) He'd be damn cautious of Buffy, whether she has a soul or not.
2.) Having Buffy drain Linda...right!
3.) Going along with the idea of making Faith a vamp...come on! Not after Jesse.
4.) Letting Buffy bite Giles. Xander would have staked Buffy a lot sooner than that!

Good luck with the fic! I just can't see your version of it!

Thank you!
Review By [FatherAndSonGrimm] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Time For The End" from Obsidian
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awesome! just freaking awesome!
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [20 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Time For The End" from Bill
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So very well done!
Review By [Bill] • Date [15 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Time For The End" from stargatefan
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It was a great story. I really like the pairing. A nicer fate couldn't happen to the council. I just wish things turned out better for Cordy but at least she didn't die. Thanks for writing this.
Review By [stargatefan] • Date [30 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Time For The End" from Cadams
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Have to say you know how to put a story together. really like The way you allowed Xander to grow and become a real main player, I'm getting tired of authors that just turn him in to other people.
Review By [Cadams] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Well... This took a strange turn somewhere" from Chikageko
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Your explanation on familiars isn't... entirely... accurate. It works well enough for the story and the bloodletting and incantation are correct but it's not just a vampire or vampire/vampire slayer who can do it, It's an open option to anyone with a little power. I assume you did some quicky research before writing that? The ceremonies different in almost every fic where there is one but those two items always remain. target familiar drinks your blood you say an incantation the target becomes loyal to you and you gain some of their power. Different things depending on what or who the target is.
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [25 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Warlocks Are A Bitch" from unicornzvi
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The concept is intriguing and the story is technically well written. However while both chapter 1 and chapter 2 are each seperatly quite well written with believable characterization(with the exception of Xander not asking Buffy for some way to contact her) they do not fit together. Xander keeping his initial struggles with magic secret is quite believable, as is Xander managing to master the magic we see him use in chapter 2, however him keeping it secret from his friends at that point is NOT believable since he is quite a bit past the point where he can provide significant assistance with magic.
Review By [unicornzvi] • Date [27 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Time For The End" from VillageOrchid
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very interesting twists...liked the side visit to the other dimension, and the transformation for the deamon into another biological being. Where did all of the energy go, though?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: Dammit Cordelia! Just Shut Up!" from VillageOrchid
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Continuing to enjoy both the plot and the character moments.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What, you need a catchy title for every chapter?" from VillageOrchid
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Lots of plot here.... but yeah I see who became the next slayer. Maybe she can guard the Clevland hellmouth?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Well... This took a strange turn somewhere" from VillageOrchid
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Sure, did. Not sure about how i feel about the familiar/renfield situation... but the motivations were plausible, and the storytelling good.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "If you kill a demon in a forest" from VillageOrchid
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Enjoying how the plot is flowing from the character motivations.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Not Rated
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