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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from veslefrick
Review:
wow.. that was awesome! :)
Review By [veslefrick] • Date [6 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Oh my Goodness.

You're bloody brilliant- you know that? Damn. I was expecting something cute and light but did not expct this. I never *ever* would have made the connection of what that pick-up line would mean for Buffy.

So good. Soooo good.

*bows to thee*
Comments from author:
Thanks so much! That's exactly what I was shooting for when I wrote it =D
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [9 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
That was brutally, painfully good. Ouch. Talk about steppin' in it and slipping hard on your ass!

Blue

Yup, it was funny too... and yeah, can totally see Faith kickin' Dean in the man bits or simply putting a steel toe biker boot toe in his gut while he was still on the ground. he wouldn't have a clue what hit him. Buffy might be pissed about her bike, but then again... only friends let others ride their bikes... so Faith's definitely her bud!
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [30 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from wyvernwolf
Review:
Nice fic usage of what I personally think is a dreadful pickup line. :-)
Review By [wyvernwolf] • Date [18 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
OMG!!!! That's the best (& saddest) use of that line on her of all people. Bet he never thought that he'd get a serious answer to that line.
Comments from author:
Haha, I really wouldn't think so either.
Or, knowing him, he'd expect her to go along with it becuase *rolls eyes* after all averyone must want him, right? =P
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [29 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Specks
Review:
Nice. I never would have thought the impact of that well used line on Buffy. Very very nice.
Comments from author:
Muchos gracias!
Review By [Specks] • Date [20 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Lala
Review:
I have only one word to say...Brilliant.

Love,
Gemma
Comments from author:
Thanks so much, it makes me feel like my work's appreciated =]
Review By [Lala] • Date [5 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from clarityfades
Review:
Fantastic!! & w/ a perfect ending! :)
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [3 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from exqurere
Review:
whoa awesome, poor Buffy with the memories and poor Dean for not realising he was being an idiot.
Comments from author:
I know =[.
and thanks!
Review By [exqurere] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TammyJet
Review:
Wow. Cheesy line, but a heck of a take on it.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [TammyJet] • Date [22 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)lckybr
Review:
hahaha. idk if it was meant to be amusing but i thought it was funny... :)

Ali
Comments from author:
You and your dark sense of human girlie=P
Review By [(Past Donor)lckybr] • Date [22 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SlowMercury
Review:
Ooo, that's bad! But there's really no way Dean could have known--normally, that'd be just a silly pick-up line, not the equivalent of a stab in the stomach. And I don't know if this is what you were thinking at all, but I kinda see Buffy storming off after that and leaving Faith to make mincemeat out of Dean. Because Faith may enjoy yanking Buffy's chain, but I don't think she'll like it when anyone else does, especially if that other person goes right for the jugular. I hope you do write a squeal with Dean, Faith and Buffy all discussing their various visits to hell (Faith and Buffy have, at the very least, been through the Hellmouth at the end of Season 7). Anyway, very interesting!
Comments from author:
Yeah, I agree with you on the attitude, but I see Faith as more of someone who would, as she follows Buffy out be like 'Thanks for that.',and 'accidentaly' step on Dean's [insert polite phrase for 'man bits' here]

And thanks!
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [21 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from xanderfan
Review:
This is awesome, I read the summary and just knew that it was going to be angsty. Poor Buffy suffering from that kind of insensitivity, but I have to forgive Dean, he really didn't know.

I wonder if you can make a similar ficlet about Dean's time in hell. That would be interesting to read.
Comments from author:
Thanks for realizing what I didn't when I wrote it =P. And yeah, you can get annoyed at Dean, but really, can you stay angry? Never.

And idk.. OH GOD STOP IT! My muse is trying to take over my body! LORD LOVE A DUCK, MAKE IT STOP!
Review By [xanderfan] • Date [21 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShyBob
Review:
I was going to skip this because of the cheesy pickup line, but then realized it was going to be a serious fic. And you didn't disappoint. Clever hook, solid execution. Poor Buffy. And you know Faith's gonna drag Dean off and have her way with him.
Comments from author:
Firstly, I'm [mucho] glad that you didn't skip it, secondly, thanks very much, thirdly, yes. I really felt for her for something to remind her of what happened.
And about Faith and Dean.. wishful thinking? =P
Haha but actually I don't really know, though I can definetely see Dean (right after getting his ass shoved on the ground) turn around and try to solicit Faith =D.
[oh, and please ignore how the first sentence is written like a badly worded 4th grader's essay.]
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [20 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from pezz
Review:
What a fabulous little ficlet. It would be just like Dean to use such a pick-up line and have it backfire so spectacularly. I'd love to read more:)
Comments from author:
Yea, I just felt that Dean had to have some rejections under his belt, right? I think he's just used to getting his way too often.
Review By [pezz] • Date [20 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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