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Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from nemmodo
Review:
Brilliant story.

Wish that it had been continued.
Review By [nemmodo] • Date [12 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from HarryMuto
Review:
Seriously good, please continue soon
Review By [HarryMuto] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from draconis
Review:
I'll up the rating to a 9 if you continue the story....excellent story, unique plot.
Review By [draconis] • Date [30 Jun 11] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from draconis
Review:
I'll change my review to an 8 if you haven't abandoned this story.
Review By [draconis] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Hanzo
Review:
Absolutely Awesome ♥
Unique in every aspect ♥
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from lordamnesia
Review:
I would freaking love to see this story continue! A 'What should have happened at the end of year 2 and year 5' coupled with a magical!Buffy is a awesome combo. Don't need to say much else cept I hope to see more!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [12 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from whatareyouevensaying
Review:
This story is really brilliant, I hope you do decide to continue it eventually. What you've done with both Harry and Buffy is something I haven't seen before.

Looking forward to more.
Review By [whatareyouevensaying] • Date [8 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [8 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from ChiVayne
Review:
Very happy to see a new chapter. I hope that you put in some more Harry/Buffy interaction in the next one.
Comments from author:
I went back and forth on the Harry content for a while. The original draft was only the Buffy scenes and it went longer (covering the whole episode). I then decided to bring in some Harry. The next chapter will finish the episode and include Harry... but I haven't decided which order those will occur in yet.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm really enjoying the AU-ey goodness of the plot combined with characterization moments.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Not quite sure of Harry's point beyond lucid dreaming with her... does he mean that he took a little bite of the first slayer's soul, too?
Comments from author:
It wasn't as clear as it should have been. Much as Harry was a Horcrux for Voldemort, Harry is now a Horcrux for Buffy. Since Harry has many others, it ends up making them both, effectively, immortal. Of course, in the Buffy world, there are many horrible things that can happen to you that a Horcrux wouldn't help with so it's not as great as it sounds.

Eventually, I'll be exploiting the linking aspect of it, but it'll be a while.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from winnie
Review:
What a good ending to the chapter. Of course, now I want more soon. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Heh, this is the only story I have where ideas are actually flowing. There was originally another scene in the chapter that I pushed to the next which had a better ending line. It involves Buffy being a badass, which is always fun.
Review By [winnie] • Date [25 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Cool pay off to the set up... and now just about anything is possible.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm enjoying the AU set up and the almost projected idea that Hermione might end up with Willow and based on your story lable, Harry with Buffy. I like how you have the high school set up that would show how Buffy would be able to understand how Giles uses magic. The question remains if the slayer spirit pushed away Buffy's magical core, or if she's keeping it in reserve like a secret identity.
Comments from author:
Shhh! There are a bunch of folks that haven't figured out the Willow/Hermione angle yet ;)

As far as Buffy's magic went, the Slayer spirit latches on to each of its "victims", centered around that area. It's not designed to allow the Slayer to be magical, so in the rare case that they already were it blocks it. The later chapters answer this more fully.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Big twists, plausibly set up. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Jun 09] • Not Rated
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