i cried when noah died...you have a minimalistic style that acutely captures the raw agony felt by the characters....
perfect.

Wow thank you :) Noah's chapter was really hard for me to write, i really liked her, thank you so much for reading.

Ali

What a rolercoaster ride in the last few chapters. You just couldn't let them get away without a little more emotional pain, could you? Great story, good characterization of Draco and his relationship with Willow and the world as whole. It's intriguing with a story that is so characterdriven, and that takes you so deep into that character that outside forces appear kinda fractured. Thanks for sharing. It's been a pleasure to read.

Tals

I'm sorry sweets! That hurt me too i liked Noah i actually had planned a different direction (Noah would have lived and there was only ONE baby) but in the middle of the chapter i was writing the idea for Shatter and the ending just strted pouring out and i've learned not to fight the muse, makes her pouty. I'm really glad you enjoyed it! This i think was actually my favorite fic to write, this series even better than the Mommy Anita fics ;p Look out for another one.

Ali

Wonderful job on this. Even if you DID make me cry like a baby when Noah died. All the adults in the world can die in horribly gruesome ways and it doesn't phase me, but children...It breaks me. Must be because I've got a 4 year old.

Again, great job. Beautiful ending.

LOL when i write chapters i say it out loud as i type it and dude I was crying like FOUR BABIES lol, i coudln't even see the keys, i really liked Noah and i know how much Faith and Draco loved Noah so that was even harder (i've got a three year old neice whose like my kid if i had to see her hurt it would kill me) Thank you so much for reading, look out for the next one.

Ali

Lovely. And I love how he keeps track of the time Willow has been pregnant; how important the unborn child is to him.

Tals

Thank you! i'm almost done with the next chapter!

Ali

Awesome. I love the way you're writing this is different and refreshing not to mention this site needed more Willow and Draco.

Thank you! Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it, there really isn't enough Willow Draco, too true!

Thanks for reading

Ali

It's beautiful! I love the little glances into his new Muggle life which show how comfortable he's become in the Muggle world, yet it's still somewhat alien to him. And the romance, why, that's just so sweet!

Thank you thank you! i love that you love it lol, there is more yet to come!

Ali

So sweet... A very intimate story as well. I think it's because your writing style cuts away all of the surrouding details; no descriptions of physical locations, no detailed context. The focus in the story/stories is so tight, dealing with Draco, Willow and the very immediate sensations, emotions and thoughts. I think that's where the "intimacy" of your story comes from.

Loved the detail about Willow smelling like strawberries. Of course Draco should probably keep that quiet.

Tals

thanks so much! i'm glad you like! i liv to serve!

Ali

Beautiful. I'm glad you decided to continue Willow and Draco's story. You were right it wasn't quite finished with the last one. I love your style of writing in this series. It's an unusual perspective. Thank you!

Thank you! i'm glad you like.

Ali

Aww. That was such a sweet chapter. But you still get a sense of exactly how messed up Draco still is. He seems kinda stunned at his new life/his place in life, and that he is trusted. It seems very fragile still, just under the surface of things. Really lovely chapter. I'm glad you choose to continue the story/series.

Tals

Thank you! yeah hes still got a way to go! lol i wasn't goin to but i got sum emails so i did lol, im glad i did too i can't wait to see Draco as a daddy

Sigh... glad your writing again. Know your busy with school but thanks Ali girl for doing what you can.

your welcome, i'm taking requests for Anita Blake Executioner And...Mom so if there is something you want to see let me know? as always your thoughts are appreciated.

ali

Just so u know, i love t his series, love it love it love it... well actually i love everythign u write.. please don't stop ok?
keep going cuz it's great

lol i live to serve as long as there are ppl reading i will write ;p thanks for reading!

Ali

YES!!!!
THANK YOU!!!
......and on to the review.

I still love the way that you write.

And I loved the television =D.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Thank you so much :D

Ali