Review of chapter "Chapter TwentyThree - Moving" from Terapsina
Review:
Even though this chapter is kinda short you wrote in enough Max and Logan for us to be happy for some chapters onwards, so it was still very nice. I like the moment were Jam Pony head heard that Max was back, it was very funny and completely in character. The only thing that's still making me sad is the fact that Original Cindy probably wont be seen anymore. I really liked her.
Review By [Terapsina] • Date [8 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter TwentyTwo - Getting Comfortable" from Terapsina
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I have three things that I want to tell you... so I will ;) 1) I like how you made Willow here, I don't think that I have ever read a fic where she's blind. Gotta say it's an interesting concept. 2) So is Max Faith's daughter? Because by the X5's reaction to Faiths name it seems to be something along those lines. 3) Great work and cant wait to see more, but you should really think about advancing Syl as a character, I mean she is the actual Slayer.
Comments from author:
Syl definitely shines in this one later on. Max right now is the only one who's aware that Faith is there, mostly because she was the one in Manticore. She's not Faith's daughter, though. Thanks for the review!
Review By [Terapsina] • Date [12 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter TwentyOne - Left In This City" from supernaturalfanatic
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Oh no! How does she know about Willow?! Just who was Renfro before she came into this position? And damnit, Max, tell the others who you keep seeing before it's too late!
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen - It Cannot Be Stopped" from lovinTiva
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Excellent. I really hope that they are able to escape and that Max is alright. Please update soon!
Review By [lovinTiva] • Date [8 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen - Mirror Images" from draconis
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Excellent last few chapters. Really like the directions you take this story.
I'm hoping Max's "Faith"/"Max" visitor was a Slayer connection and not the First Evil. Didn't seem like its style...trying to give Max hope and all (even if Max now thinks she's going nuts).
Really looking forward to what happens with Renfro.
Krit's revelation about "The Initiative" is intriguing. Just how much does he REALLY know?
Review By [draconis] • Date [22 Jun 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine - To Hunt the Vampires" from fanofkali
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Interesting premise for this story. Looking forward to seeing were it is going.
Review By [fanofkali] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven - One Born" from CPTSkip
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I am quite enjoying your story. Nice job with everyones' characters and I look forward to more. I am a bit bothered by Tara not being there. But I guess we just have to wait to find out where she is. I'm going to be optimistic and hope she is home taking care of Willow's and her kids. Lol!
