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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MavenAlysse

Review:

::low whistle:: Damn.

Um... literally?

Wow. Now that's .... ::shaking head:: I have no words.

It's been a while since I've read the books, but the first movie had Susan practically a tertiary character. I can see why she could feel this way - being returned to the mortal world, denied the magic of Narnia; and for what?

Thank you for sharing this.

-Maven Alysse

Comments from author:

You're welcome and thank you for the review.

Review By [MavenAlysse] • Date [26 Jan 09] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kaekae

Review:

wow - had never really thought of her - except that she would be lonely.
I think you captured the voice of Chronicles.

Comments from author:

Thanks ^_^

Review By [kaekae] • Date [26 Jan 09] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from tals

Review:

That's some bad decision-making skills, right there.

Tals

Review By [tals] • Date [26 Jan 09] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip

Review:

I was always bothered by Susan's fate in the Narnia books. I'm not sure if your story really has a happy ending, but I liked it.

Comments from author:

I can honestly say I'm not really sure what kind of ending I would consider this to be, but I had fun righting. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the review ^_^

Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [26 Jan 09] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Fregith

Review:

"What lay beyond for her, none could say."

Except we kind of can. If she's "lucky," she gets the same limbo those dwarves get at the end of the final book. If not, that means Tash manages to claim her.

And most tragic, it's her own damn fault.

Comments from author:

Well that's one perspective. Or perhaps the books had an unreliable narrator and Aslan may not be the only benevolent force out. Or perhaps I'm just full of it. I leave that up to the reader.

Thanks for the review.

Review By [Fregith] • Date [26 Jan 09] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from matthew

Review:

Damn....

Now that's dark.

Comments from author:

Thanks, that's exactly what I was going for.

Review By [matthew] • Date [25 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]

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