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Halloween World: Last Night Of The Old World

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Review of chapter "You've got to have a hat" from CPTSkip
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Sorry about the duplication.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You've got to have a hat" from CPTSkip
Review:
I like it, but it is also a bit depressing since we know what Hell is coming in a few more minutes. Well done and I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. As for it being depressing, that's sort of the point. The main story is so big on flashy stuff and people being awesome that's it's easy to forget that something pretty damn horrific has happened. Showing what people were doing minutes before they were replaced by their costume personas and/or their world fell apart seemed a good way of adding some pathos.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You've got to have a hat" from Arete
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A proper Jäger must always have a 'nize hat'. If he doesn't, he's not a Jäger!
Comments from author:
That's not quite true, what about Maxim? Then again, he did have a very nice hat before he gave it away as a mark of respect.
Review By [Arete] • Date [18 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Minutes to Go" from spaceman
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Interesting story. One I haven't reviewed before. It's a good short.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I may or may not continue it, it depends if I have any good ideas.
Review By [spaceman] • Date [3 Jun 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Minutes to Go" from JediClaire
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Wow. I recognized most of the characters, and it is a great way of adding to Halloween world. Please write more.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, I was starting to think that this story was a dud. I'll add more if and when inspiration strikes (it's not being terribly co-operative at the moment I'm afraid). It's an open story though so if you've got any ideas of your own then add away. As for the story itself, there's so much awesomeness occuring in the main story that it's a bit hard to remember that the event was a global tragedy, so I wrote this as a sort of reminder to add a bit more pathos to the proceedings. Showing who people were before the event and how totally unaware they were of what was going to happen seemed like a good way of doing that.
Review By [JediClaire] • Date [10 Feb 09] • Not Rated
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