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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Letomo
Review:
Oh, I dearly wish there were more to this story. It is good, both parts of it [Woebegone Son and Star Dancer], and I would love to read more!
Review By [Letomo] • Date [17 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from tonisimone
Review:
how does the prophesy translate to jayne's sibs being important? i didn't quite get that.
Review By [tonisimone] • Date [9 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from CleoVamp
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You have to continue this. I want to know more about this prophecy and who the players are. I truly enjoyed this and was sad that Spike got dusted. More soon, Please.
Review By [CleoVamp] • Date [15 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Elleria
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Update soon please!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [20 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Lyd
Review:
I liked this chapter, but it did feel a bit like a tease. I mean prophecy, Jayne's Mom, Slayer (born of Reavers?), these are all very cool but I want more information. I am horribly greedy, sorry.
Review By [Lyd] • Date [27 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Angelfirenze
Review:
Yep. Still evil as hell. Jayne named his very favorite gun after his sister? But...why?

Actually, I have a twin. Okay, I get it now. Damn, you're evil.
Comments from author:
I take it you have no sisters.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [27 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from zafaran
Review:
Uh-oh, this looks like Drucilla just went through. StarDancer would make an interesting name for her since she was always dancing and listening to what the stars had to tell her. More, more, more, please. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [21 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from ordieth
Review:
very confusing chapter, but a good introduction of new characters.
Review By [ordieth] • Date [21 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Angelfirenze
Review:
Dude, you're just plain evil. And this sentence reads oddly: The coordinates Xander had pointed them towards was in the middle of a storm, and they were told that they absolutely could not go around it.

Since 'coordinates' is plural and the subject of the sentence, 'was' should be 'were', I believe. *nods*
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [20 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Angelfirenze
Review:
How the hell do you make things happen without actually making things happen? My head is going to explode, here! And...you've just reminded me that Wash is dead. *whimpers*
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [13 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Angelfirenze
Review:
See, now, you're just mean. You leave us dangling this way and all we can do is wait for an update.

I'm not sorry about Badger, though. He annoyed the hell out of me unless he was talking to River. Prat. Still, well -- yes, I'm sorry he died. But only because he's a human being and life is worth something to me.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [6 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Angelfirenze
Review:
Oh, here's the sequel you hid from me! And you're still dangling threads in front of us, I see. *fakes a glare* I need an update for the pure sake of understanding what's happening. But you knew that, I'm sure.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [6 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Mieka
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Yeah!! Sequel!!! I'm very excited and can't wait to read more . . . :)
Review By [Mieka] • Date [30 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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