I love this wonderful story so far. I love how Xander and Oz act with each other it's so cute. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [3 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This is great. Cousin Tony is a hoot and I think Ducky would make a wonderful Watcher. Obviously both Ducky and Tony know about the 'real world', so the others should probably be indoctrinated; especially if Gibbs or Abby get wind of something 'hinky'.
You didn't mention Xander's eye one way or the other; so either Tony knew or it's still there. Plus Oz... obviously something changed from canon during S4, so filling in the backstory while giving Gibbs the facts about vamps and slayers would fit in perfectly.
Can't wait for more. This is a wonderful beginning.
Comments from author:
Hey Scorpio, I'm don't really have much planned for this story. My Plot Bunny decided to take an extended vacation and not tell me about it. Really all this was, was a way to relive some boredom in a particularly long Drama Class.
I'm glad you like it though and I will try to update this story.
Forever Yours, WOLFCHILD
Review By [Scorpio] • Date [15 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
More, more, more, please. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [29 Jan 09] • Not Rated
