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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
Needs catsup, salt and pepper? Okay those aren't really condiments that I like very much hate pepper, the duck sauce never had before. I do have to wonder if the merging of the primal will make Harry want hi s meat a bit more rare then he did before. I have to wonder what the flip side of this is going to be aka: Xander although I am hoping that the sequel will answer that question. I do have to wonder when I am reading some of your work if you are entirely sane, not that I am complaining mind you. :-D
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing.

My muse has some idea about the Xander side of this story, but nothing that she's telling me to write down and post, unfortunately. ;-(

And as far as my sanity is concerned, it went bye-bye along time ago. ;-)
Review By [twlight] • Date [28 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from warslick
Review:
Good story that needs more written for it. Love his new outlook on life, now if that was the way he thought in the books it would be so much better.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I appreciate your reviewing and letting me know you enjoyed the story. ;-)

And Merged-Harry's attitude has changed significantly from that of the canon character JKR showed us, which is going to be quite unfortunate for anyone he might decide is an impediment to his plans for himself and his friends.
Review By [warslick] • Date [2 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Markelo
Review:
Harmione makes more sense than Hinny.
Comments from author:
Yes, it certainly does. Hermione would *hurt* me if I referred to them by that appellation. ;-)
Review By [Markelo] • Date [29 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great start...I am interested in seeing where you go with it.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I appreciate your reviewing and letting me know you enjoyed the story.

The sequel is 'Objects Are Closer Than They Appear.'
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [28 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Zoanzon
Review:
Ok, I gotta say; this is pretty good. I'm not good at going into detail, but you handled the "who am I?" part pretty well, and I loved the mental fight.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I appreciate your reviewing the story and commenting.

I was hoping to keep who the narrator was uncertain for as long as possible. ;-)
Review By [Zoanzon] • Date [21 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from egwolf
Review:
great story!!!!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks. Appreciate your reviewing and commenting.
Review By [egwolf] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great story!
I love the Harry/Hermione paring wonderful!
I love the "eat your enemy" bit - works well with the Primal.

Thanks for a wonderful story!
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from willboon
Review:
loved it
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)

Hopefully, more to come, but that's up to my muse.
Review By [willboon] • Date [13 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Lucinda
Review:
This version of Harry would definitely be much darker than the Wizarding World expects... and he'd have a much better chance of surviving the mess of fighting Voldemort & minions mostly on his own, as I rather doubt that the majority of Wizarding United Kingdom would be any more willing to help him. Darker, but much, much more capable...

I certainly wouldn't mind seeing this continued.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story.

And this version of Harry would OWN the Wizarding World within a few months, should he decide he's actually interested in doing so. Although why he would want to associate with so many brain-damaged people long term, I can't understand. ;-)

Anyway, my muse has a couple ideas to continue this that are floating around my brain, so I'll wait to see whether she settles on any particular one and go from there.
Review By [Lucinda] • Date [24 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LordSia
Review:
Awesome. Pity it's so short - but hey, there were at least four other ideas in the challenge! You'll have to write them up as well, don't you?
"Harry, what are you-"
"Shhh! Be vewy qwuiet. I'm hunting dwak lowds..."
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)

As far as the other possibilities are concerned, that's up to my muse. ;-)
Review By [LordSia] • Date [15 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Markelo
Review:
So Harry got Xander's sense of humor and style.
Comments from author:
Yep. But I think that Hermione will be able to do something about his sense of style. ;-)

As for his sense of humor and sense of justice, I almost pity the Wizarding World, except for the fact that the majority of them are complete dithering idiots who probably couldn't find their butts without the help of a half-dozen of their fellow idiots. ;-)
Review By [Markelo] • Date [28 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LFW
Review:
Excellent
I hope that you can add to this to let us know how the rest of the story goes. Saving Sirius, protecting Luna, dealing with the Dursleys and Dumbles and especially verbally disabusing Draco of his worth as a sparring partner versus Queen Cordelia(I loved the comparison).
Thanks
Comments from author:
Thanks.

There will be more - just not sure exactly when, at the moment. And not to worry, Draco will be receiving his fair share of abuse. ;-)
Review By [LFW] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cateagle
Review:
*chuckle* I love this one and the affect of that special halloween costume on Harry. I daresay Ron's likely not going to appreciate the "new and improved" Harry, especially as Harry & Hermione are now quite firmly together. He might want to take some other seasonings with him when he goes after Riddle, perhaps some suitable chili 'fixin's" or tabasco sauce.

*snicker* It's prohably my ill-spent youth, but the very end of this one makes me think of Harry doing an "Elmer Fudd, the hunter" impersonation, "Be vewy, vewy, quiet, I'm hunting Widdles!"
Comments from author:
Yeah, Harry finally caught a break when it came to Fate messing with his life, and this time around, he's not going to let the old fart or anyone else keep on messing with him or the people he cares about.

And I think that chili fixings or Tabasco sauce goes with just about everything except ice cream. (And I can see Dawn shaking her head 'no' in disagreement when I say that.)

Ans I love, and absolutely agree with, your idea of harry doing an Elmer Fudd impression. ;-)
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [4 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)redjacobson
Review:
I can't believe I either missed this one, or didn't take time to review! An excellent beginning, and I really hope your muse feeds you more of this story (although, not the way you fed Xander in this story *GRIN* can I just say 'eeww!")

Red
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing, buddy.

And as far as Harry's dietary habits are concerned, it's best to consider that more as mineral and/or dietary supplements. ;-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)redjacobson] • Date [4 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from theladyseraphina
Review:
Ohh I really liked this.

Cant wait to see where it goes if you do add more!
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed the story. ;-)

Not sure how I'll follow this up, or even if I will.

After all, the story could be from Xander's POV after Halloween, or could be showing what Harry v2.0 does to ensure the safety of everyone he cares about and stop Tom before he gets re-embodied at the end of the Tournament.

Guess I'll just have to see what the Muse wants to inspire.

Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing.
Review By [theladyseraphina] • Date [24 Jun 09] • Not Rated
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