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Review of chapter "Emergence" from djhardim
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I was rereading this and noticed a small error.

Somehow, it all changed once Harry’s magical core “woke” up and was able to wrap itself around the young teen’s body and covered it with an invisible net of mystic steel.

As you stated in the next chapter, Harry's visit to the zoo took place a few years earlier than in canon. So, rather than saying "the young teen's body", it should be "the young boy's body".

A child is a teenager if his age is between thirteen and nineteen.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [23 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "For The Sake of Who I Am" from KingDarius
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interesting so far. i hope you update soon.
Review By [KingDarius] • Date [16 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "For The Sake of Who I Am" from Elleria
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Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "For The Sake of Who I Am" from CrystalBlaze
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Merlin.

I had a feeling Ambrosius would be.

I suspect that the Source, in Harry's world, decided to more than split, but raather to completely divide and empower aspects of everything.

While Merlin's magic died out after his heartbreak in the Highlander's world, it started early and always was in the Potterverse as the entity that would have made Methos and his children instead became the Wizarding World.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [9 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "For The Sake of Who I Am" from VillageOrchid
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This is pretty cool... and without knowing exactly how magic is supposed to work yet in this world... it gives Methos something to learn and experiment with... and Harry an edge of not having preconceived notions of what he can and cannot do.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "For The Sake of Who I Am" from samsas
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Nice twist...

I would like to see more when you get a chance.
Review By [samsas] • Date [8 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "For The Sake of Who I Am" from Bobboky
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cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [8 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "For The Sake of Who I Am" from banner
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This is fun!
You've taken some of our most beloved canon and twisted it into a completely new (and fascinating) history. I love it.
Review By [banner] • Date [8 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "For The Sake of Who I Am" from nukeswolf
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I hope there will be more of this, I really like this =)
Review By [nukeswolf] • Date [8 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Emergence" from Drake
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An interesting story, though I found it hard to accept that Methos would just tolerate the abuse; any abuse. Even if he doesn't take revenge, he should take steps to end the abuse, either by calling the authorities or making a few ghostly (or not so ghostly) appearances. If it were just him, he might stay silent if there were a good enough reason, but I never got the impression that he'd let a child suffer like this for no reason at all.

If there is a reason, you need to do some more explaining it; we're pretty much following his thoughts anyway, so it should be included.

By the way, what happened to Harry's scar? Is there a horcrux in it? If so, why doesn't Methos sense it? Does he even have it? It's not mentioned, but few HP stories really mention it unless it's important, so that's ambiguous.

Another reviewer already mentioned Legilimency; can we please have Methos tearing Snape's mind to pieces?
Comments from author:
Trust me, Snape won't know what hit him. *grin* .....neither will Albus.
Review By [Drake] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Emergence" from DofEire
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This promises to be *nifty*. I can't wait to read more!
Review By [DofEire] • Date [22 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Emergence" from Genericrandom
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Pretty awesome, and though it's not /Iron Magus/ I totally want to see more of it as soon as it's ready. Not a whole lot to comment on just yet, so I can't offer too much since this is all a lot of HP cannon recap with commentary on the alternate but still, it looks good. Keep up the great work.
Review By [Genericrandom] • Date [14 Feb 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Emergence" from FireFlash
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A Very interesting start to the story. I look forward to seeing where you go with this. Heh, an immortal Harry. Won't that just tweak Voldie's ire: his nemesis was able to gain the immortality that Voldie sought, and that it was an /accident/ to boot. :) In fact, this story has now taken 2nd place in my list of favorites among your fics. :)
Review By [FireFlash] • Date [7 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Emergence" from djhardim
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I'm looking forward to the hat's reaction to Harry.

Will Harry be able to sire children?
Review By [djhardim] • Date [3 Feb 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Emergence" from Elleria
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Very good so far. Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [3 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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