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Review of chapter "Adventures in Montana" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Like others, I went whoa about the dark bits. But the resolution with the watcher was beautiful. On the whole, the series has been fun to read through. It's been like reading about an alien race as they become / adapt. I look forward to more, if there is more.

Thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [3 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Adventures in Montana" from thundever
Review:
Great story, series, interactions and characterizations, please continue with this series and story soon, great building up of the storyline so you can see how it all happened.
Review By [thundever] • Date [9 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Adventures in Montana" from crimsonkyuubi
Review:
wow.i love this story. i love how you have mixed the world of jp and the world of btvs together in a workng form. pleaase update this soon.
Review By [crimsonkyuubi] • Date [3 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Adventures in Montana" from eriktheviking
Review:
Possibly your greatest chapter, high and lows, brutality and tenderness, all equally well written, and thank you for stopping that "yo" annoyance.

One question, how would Buffy smother Faith in her sleep?

Very well done & thanks.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked the chapter, and yeah I mean how many times does Faith have to say Yo before Buffy slaps her upside the head? LOL
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [15 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Adventures in Montana" from Crayshack
Review:
Keep up the good work.
Review By [Crayshack] • Date [14 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Adventures in Montana" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Darker than needed I think, but overall an excellent chapter.
Comments from author:
The dark fic was too dark in this chapter??? Holy cow should I be taking that as a compliment because like you just know there's something behind that statement. Right?

Anyway, glad you liked it.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [14 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Empowerment & Field Trips" from Infinix
Review:
Usually I would try for something more substantial but nifty.

Reviewer response: My apologies about the mix up, I meant I usually like to leave a more substantial review.

I'm glad to see you continuing this despite the muse being less than cooperative. While I have been enjoying the snippet story having an actual story with structure is much better.
Comments from author:
I've been meaning to post a comment on this review for some time because my muse is just dieing to know, what on earth do you mean by More Substantial? As in an Epic or something? Because everything I've written so far seems to be, I don't know on the halfway side to being close to epic without actually being epic.

I'm glad you took a chance on this story tough and have seemed to enjoy it.

Reviwee Response? Is that what you'd call me? LOL anyway, thanks that makes everything cleared up. I may have more ideas for ficlets then I do the main story, but I am enjoying both equally. For once the ficlets give me a chance to write stuff up without having to worry so much about the whole BtVS continuity. Since I've got enough WIPs with re-writes of the Buffy canon, the fact that I don't have to worry about that at all while I concentrate more on life with Xander and his Pack in the main story just gives me more fun.

Sadly after chapter three we might do the time warp thing and jump to four years later and the events of The Lost World. Because once Xander and crew leave Montana then he'd only be going to Sunnydale again and I do not, emphatically do not I might add want to re-write seasons three, four, five and six of Buffy. Although some of the ficlets might resolve ideas of changes to official canon for the big things. Like taking out Mayor Snake. Dealing with the Initiative possibly involving a kidnapping of one of the Pack and so on and so forth. Anyway, thanks for clearing up the substantial comment. LOL
Review By [Infinix] • Date [14 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Adventures in Montana" from Morgomir
Review:
Seeing as I read it while betaing it, I'll just say keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [14 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Empowerment & Field Trips" from Morgomir
Review:
Love it. Keep up the great work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Empowerment & Field Trips" from TheLaughingMan
Review:
Sexy.
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [2 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Empowerment & Field Trips" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Excellent work. Loved how God showed her hand. Hehehe. Anything to make things a bit more difficult for the Xandman. I always remember reading a certain bumper sticker when reading about Xand. It said; God won't put more weight on your shoulders than you can carry, but apparently he thinks I can bench press a Buick!

I think Buffy is starting to see Xan for who he is. Rare that. Nice work.
Comments from author:
If you think the first chapter made things more difficult for the Xandman check out what I've got happening now thanks to Chapter Two. :D
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [2 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Empowerment & Field Trips" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great mega-installment. I really liked the development of the raptors, and what, I think, Mother's intentions may be. Well done & thanks.
Comments from author:
Well here's hoping you'll enjoy the second chapter even more. As for God's or Mother's intentions may be in regards to making the Raptors more compatible to Xander if he were to, oh I don't know, get the urge... Well who can say, I'm not into Bestiality and I hardly think I want to go that far, but you never know where the next misadventure for young Xander might take him. :D
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Empowerment & Field Trips" from Miezikami
Review:
I can't contain myself any longer. I love this series. First I was like:Jurassic Park? No way! But now I can't get enough. It's great how you show the reasons why Xander does what and the interaction with the raptors is brilliant. I feel like you studied the dinos in person. Your writing style is very good, especially how you describe things that no-one has seen so far e.g. the nest. I hope there will be more soon. Write on you got a fan in me =^_^=
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying this series. I find it most fun to write personally because it's just so easy to come up with great gags or heartwrenching scenes. I'm not sure if I studied the dinos in person or anything, but I do like writing them as characters. Showing why Xander does what he does is fairly easy considering Xander is one of the characters I find easier to get character wise as opposed to someone like Spike or even Robin Wood.

Anyway, I am going to be doing some interesting things in chapter two, I hope it won't dissapoint.
Review By [Miezikami] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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