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Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Dragonelf
Review:
You have done a good job with this story.

The only mistake I noticed in the story was that you used the word "brake" in several places in the story instead of "break" in the story.

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Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [29 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from lunalurker
Review:
A very unexpected and enjoyable crossover story, and the first good redemption of Vader story I've seen. Not that I read Star Wars anywhere but this site, but still. :)
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [1 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Harry
Review:
Sounds like Vader ran into Ancient Technology, which means a trip to Cheyenne Mountain and SG-1!
Review By [Harry] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Harry
Review:
It sounds like when Vader/Anikan rejected the First, it returned his standing as a Jedi, and the Force began to heal him! Now, lets see what he is going to do with his life.
Review By [Harry] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Harry
Review:
*Jaw drops* PADME! PADME is BACK! Maybe there IS some hope of redemption for Vader after all!
Review By [Harry] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Harry
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Oh LORD! With Vader dying and Anikan coming back, how long will this little apartment last? Vader/Skywalker is a powerful weilder of the force. If the gang is not careful, it could be the end of them!
Review By [Harry] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Harry
Review:
OH LORD! Vader is in the HOUSE and has his sights set on Willow! Question is, will she allow the Dark Side of the Force to control her, or will she get Lord Vader to see the light?
Review By [Harry] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Introduction and Chapter 1" from Harry
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Vader, in Sunnydale, seeking Willow as his apprentice? *Hits Red Alert siren* This does NOT bode well for all atop the Hellmouth!
Review By [Harry] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from PChazzman
Review:
Very interesting story idea. A little short (for my tastes) and some minor errors. Otherwise, I liked this and am very interested in seeing what changes with Vader returning to SW-universe.
Review By [PChazzman] • Date [2 Feb 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Kennie
Review:
Very good and really enjoyable. Some minor spelling confusions and grammar mistakes (nothing that couldn't be fixed by a Beta) but well-written and executed with a compelling storyline.

I liked the way that you pulled the Stargate mythos into the story... I've got my fingers crossed that you'll write the story of Vader's return via the SGC. :D

Kennie
Review By [Kennie] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
Okay, this is interesting. Kinda new in a way, too. The point of view from Vader's/Anakin's mind is pretty cool.
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [1 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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