Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Stationary
love the little plot bunny that got you to write this but you should take another look at the formatting. don't know whether it was the site refusing to accept whatever formattting you chose or whether you typed it up this way but it's awkward and make the story less enjoyable to read.
Review By [Stationary
] • Date [11 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from PrincessTai
Awww! I like that one. He was(did, is ... whichever) doing quite a very good job :-)
Review By [PrincessTai
] • Date [3 Feb 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]