I have re-read this story for a couple of years now... I wish you had been able to finish it I always get giddy at the end and then pout for ten minutes when I know it will never go on.
Review By [Jess] • Date [4 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Just had to let you know how great I think this story concept is. I do agree with everyone else though, Spike just came into it so I must have more....please!?!? My birthday is on July 2nd and I wouldn't complain if you just happened to put another chapter or two out around then (hint, hint)(wink, wink). Anyway now that I have pretty much begged for more, I just say again what a great story I think this is. Thanx SilverMcKenzie
Review By [SilverMcKenzie] • Date [15 Jun 05] • Not Rated
It's a nice story. I'd flesh it a bit out, as it seems too rushed for me, but that's probably just a matter of personal taste :)
One advice, though: Run the story through a spell-checker. Several of your spelling mistakes would have been caught in one, and it would make the story much easier to read.
But all in all an interesting story.
Review By [Norwegianne] • Date [1 Nov 04] • Not Rated
Hey, Really interested in seeing what you are going to do with this... are you planning on finishing this fic?
Comments from author:
I'm sorry if you are all waiting for the end, but like I wrote at the beginning of this fic, the original ending sucked. I will write another one, but when I am inspired. My beeing not inspired is what caused the origianl ending to suck.
Review By [CountessMary] • Date [6 Feb 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
