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Review of chapter "His Name Is Ted—Can You Believe That?" from garrycooper
Review:
Very good.
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [25 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Name Is Ted—Can You Believe That?" from Gideon
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Ted might be doing this out of selfish motives but it does seem like it is the best thing for Buffy and her mother too. I don't know how it will turn out for the rest of the gang though!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [9 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "His Name Is Ted—Can You Believe That?" from deathgeonous
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Had the urge to reread this. Still as good as the first time. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [27 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Name Is Ted—Can You Believe That?" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
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Nice!
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [22 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "His Name Is Ted—Can You Believe That?" from deathgeonous
Review:
Now this, this is an interesting idea. Thanks for writing it, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [18 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Name Is Ted—Can You Believe That?" from vargamor
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Short but a very nice setup. I have nightmare visions about old Donna being replaced with Joycie...please say it ain't so LOL...though it does have potential. I'm really looking forward to seeing what you do with the rest. Nice job.
Review By [vargamor] • Date [22 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Name Is Ted—Can You Believe That?" from SilverWave
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This is good!

Thanks :)
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [14 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Nightscream
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I only have one concern. Will her friends and other loved ones know she's still alive? I mean they hate the council just as much as Buffy does, and its just the council that needs to belive she's dead. I can also forsee Buffy and Eddie having MAJOR issues in the future. Casue Buffy dosen't see the world of the supernatural in Black and White like Edward does. Human (not monsters) Supernatural (Monsters and need to die).
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [11 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Name Is Ted—Can You Believe That?" from KnightOwl
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The way this story played out it would be smart for Buffy to get away from the Watchers Council. They did betray her and they have never seemed to be on the slayer's side. It will be interesting to see what her life is like in the other world. I can't wait to read the next part of this series.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your thoughts and feedback! I appreciate it. Hope you enjoy the next part in the series!
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [10 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Name Is Ted—Can You Believe That?" from clarityfades
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Good story! I liked that Buffy didn't believe or trust Edward at all. & Joyce's naivete really came through. Hope Joyce doesn't start trusting Edward, or Buffy may have to lay down the law with her...I'm assuming that will have to happen to some extent with Edward. Otherwise, Edward will just run right over Buffy trying to make her like him. & I get the feeling that Joyce's naivete is going to be a problem...she was so clueless about Buffy's slaying--I don't see her wising up to Edward. But maybe she'll surprise me & not be as useless as in canon. I'm excited to see that there'll be a sequel...I hope Buffy makes Edward give her some time with Giles before they leave, Giles was/is like a father to her, so I'd like her to have some closure there. & who knows, given that Giles told Buffy the truth (& we know how the canon episode turned out), perhaps he'll be the only one who knows she's still alive. I can understand if you don't want him involved though, to fully immerse Buffy in Edward's world. Looking forward to the sequel. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you! Yeah, I don't see Joyce figuring out Edward either. She seems like the type that sees what she wants to, and you're right. She was clueless about Buffy's slaying. That always bothered me. I do hope, though, that Joyce will go through a bit of a transformation into someone that realizes the world of vampires is something Buffy can't escape from. I hate the role of the clueless mother. There are a lot of smart, competent women out there that don't become dumb just because the reproduce.

Wow. I just ranted a little bit. Sorry about that. I hope you enjoy the next part and thanks for the kind feedback!
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [10 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Name Is Ted—Can You Believe That?" from (Current Donor)romero
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I'm relieved that Joyce will go along with Ted's plan. I liked how Buffy related that she needed to hunt. What Ted does and how much he gets paid will be an eyeopener for them.
Comments from author:
It will be! And, it'll be nice to have Buffy be able to support herself with an income for what she does instead of having to flip burgers and stake vamps to get by.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [10 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Name Is Ted—Can You Believe That?" from Mephisteus
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It's a bit short, but that's just about the only reason I'm not recommending it :)

Good stuff.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. Thanks!
Review By [Mephisteus] • Date [10 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Name Is Ted—Can You Believe That?" from (Past Donor)morgyair
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Ted is just so devious and hey wasn't the robot guy that Joyce dated named Ted? Very interesting
Comments from author:
I think you're right, the robot dude was Ted! Creepy. And, Ted being a robot would explain his lack of humanity. I don't think I'm going to go the cyborg route for this fic, but that'd be an interesting take.
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [10 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Name Is Ted—Can You Believe That?" from pezz
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What a great story idea!!! I've really enjoyed this fic and can't wait for the next in the series. Wonder if Buffy will be better off with "Ted" or on the Hellmouth? It's a toss-up:)
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! In my mind, Buffy would be better with Ted in some respects. Hope you continue to enjoy this and thanks for the feedback!
Review By [pezz] • Date [10 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "His Name Is Ted—Can You Believe That?" from kittenpoker
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whooo! i'm excited. can't wait to see what trouble they get up to. Are you going to have "Ted" train Buffy as a hunter?! That would be great...but I'm pretty sure that anything you come up with will be awesome, so have at!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kind words and feedback! I'm working on Ted training Buffy and hope to get the next part out soon. Thanks again for the feedback you gave during this fic. I appreciate it!
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [10 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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