It's too bad this one won't go any further. It has potential to be a good, long fic. The idea of Willow as Mrs. Wayne (though the name Willow Wayne is a little unfortunate) is great for a lot of ideas. Also, the fallout from this latest bout of irresponsibility would also be entertaining. The greatest non-empowered superhero of all time married to the most powerful witch on the planet. Lots of potential there. Consider continuing, or handing it off to someone else if that isn't your MO. Good story overall.
Review By [EricThorsen] • Date [7 Feb 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]