Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Part Nineteen" from JanessaRavenwood
Still love this story. Any word on the sequel?
Review By [JanessaRavenwood
] • Date [28 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Part Nineteen" from LisaO
I re-read this story, again. And it is still as good as the last times. I really wish you would write a sequel.
Review By [LisaO
] • Date [20 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Part Nineteen" from Hurlekain
Rereading it again it still enthralled me. Really wish you would continue. I love how the Willow-Cullie relationship is taking shape.
Review By [Hurlekain
] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Part Nineteen" from vorellaraek
This is a fantastic story - I love the setting, and Giles and Willow's reactions are very true to the characters, and wonderful to read. I hope you write more, as this deserves to be continued.
Review By [vorellaraek
] • Date [18 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Part Nineteen" from Glasbruch
What a wonderful, fantastic, brilliant story! I love it, and I hope there is more to come.
Review By [Glasbruch
] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Part Nineteen" from Xelab
Just re-read this again and it's as wonderful as it was the first time! And leaves me craving more! Heres hoping that more will be forthcoming!
Review By [Xelab
] • Date [26 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Part Nineteen" from dhcalva
A tale well woven! Can't wait for the next one in the series.
Review By [dhcalva
] • Date [22 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Part Nineteen" from JoeDineen
Just re-read the whole series again and enjoyed it justbas much as the forst time. I would dearly love to see more.
Review By [JoeDineen
] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Part One" from Deerskin
I love this story. Begging for more!!!
Review By [Deerskin
] • Date [28 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Part Nineteen" from ianquest
Just finished re-reading Chapters 1 & 2, and enjoying them as much as I did the first time around. Your characterisation and imagery is brilliant, and I feel like I'm watching a movie - so being left hanging at the end and realising there wasn't any more was a rude shock! :)
I'm hoping that life has settled down and you have plans for Chapter 3, since there's been a few other pieces of writing posted this year? (Begging face and pleading, soulful eyes...)
Great writing, and I'm looking forward to more of it, when life and the Muses permit!
Comments from author:
I'm pleased it still reads well on a second pass ... :-)
I have (finally) managed to dice out the major combat sequence for Chapter 3, but am wrestling a little with how to lead up to it - that and my thesis, which has reached 54,000 words and still has three chapters to go!
But I have not forgotten, and certainly not abandoned this. I will get back to it, I promise!
Review By [ianquest
] • Date [2 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Part One" from LuckyOne
I normally don't write reviews but this is a great story, so much that I think needs some more.
I hear you are writing a thesis and good luck with that. The way you bring Giles back to life is a great thing the added advantage of being a Dragon is a great plus.
Can't wait to hear him fly.
Willow is all the fun things I like about her, none of the "evil" stuff she played with.
A grand new beginning for her.
Can't wait for an update.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kind comments.
I tend to think that Willow, like Giles, has learned a salutary lesson or two about the misuse of magic, and won't be in a hurry to make the same mistakes again. But despite all the changes she's gone through (in canon, and in getting to Summerset) she's still Willow - bright, curious, eager to make friends, anxious to please, and a little inclined to act before she's thought all the consequences through. :-)
I too am waiting for Giles to make good use of his wings - I think, intellectually, he knows he should be able to fly, but he's not there emotionally yet. He's going to have to stop thinking like a man and let Dragon instincts take over ...
The thesis is taking centre stage at the moment, so my readers will have to be patient with me - but I will get back to this as soon as I can!
Review By [LuckyOne
] • Date [8 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Part Nineteen" from MarcusSLazarus
Nice job, to say the least.
The series continues to intrigue me, your characterisation continues to be highly effective, and the world you have presented for us here proves to be highly captivating the more we are exposed to its intricacies.
Still curious about WHAT Giles and Willow are going to be going up against in this world- the idea of them as symbols is good, don’t get me wrong, but surely symbols need something to be used AGAINST to be truly effective?-, but that aside things are going well.
If nothing else, Giles’s exploration of his abilities and history as a dragon continues to prove highly engaging; I look forward to seeing how things turn out when he’s called on to take action for the first time against a threat that merits his attention (Rather than the acid-spraying slug that can’t actually do serious damage to him OR Willow in their current states).
Keep up the great work!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus
] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Part One" from Wormbait
Hey, we havn't lost you to the new job have we?
I'm sure we'd all love to see more if you get the time.
Comments from author:
The new job *is* taking up my time - as is the thesis, which needs me to write over 60,000 words in the next five months - but I haven't abandoned this, and I will get round to writing more. I promise!
Review By [Wormbait
] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Part Nineteen" from lucidity
I love this story. Hope to see more soon!
Review By [lucidity
] • Date [11 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Part Nineteen" from Keldin
Wow. Very nice insight into the mind of a man-turned-dragon.
Review By [Keldin
] • Date [30 May 09] • Not Rated