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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Nicely done.

Do they really know he is from the 50th Century? If so, they should be asking a lot of questions!

James
Comments from author:
Gwen at least has an idea, I'm pretty sure they all do thanks to Captain John's big mouth.
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [11 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
hee!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [11 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bugeyedmonster
Review:
lol! That could be why we've never seen his answer. After all Jack strikes me more as the smart kid who was more into acting the class clown. Plus, how long has it been since his history class? If it was in elementary, it's probably been a while and he's slept since then.

(^_^)/
BEM
Comments from author:
Plus given he's from the 50th century the lesson was probably a bit vague as to precise dates. OK, he probably learned more as a time agent, but he's lost a lot of his memories of that, and had 100+ years to forget more.
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [11 Feb 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
Oops. I guess it wasn't only history where not much attention was paid at school ;)
Comments from author:
Dohhh... see comment to review below.
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [10 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CherryTiger
Review:
2009 + 82 years is 2091. That makes no sense whatsoever.

You trying to say this fic is set in 2018?
Comments from author:
Sorry - for some reason I got it wrong in the first draft, edited it out when it was first posted to livejournal, but I forgot to edit the original file. It should be 92, of course, since you include this year and 2100. Now fixed.
Review By [CherryTiger] • Date [10 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)liability
Review:
I love this!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [(Current Donor)liability] • Date [10 Feb 09] • Not Rated
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