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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Thedruid
Review:
Interesting start, great idea, and good writeing so far. But so saying that, is this your first story? Because the writeing style and plot leading is kinda amtuartish. Run-on sentances, long descriptions, re-saying of the plot to each charcter in the story, entire focus being on what is happening at that moment and ignoring whatever else might be happenig around them. Nothing really specfic, but all of that together adds up to amatuar. I'm sure your writeing will improve though.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [28 Apr 09] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [28 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Emeraldfire
Review:
Interesting!!! Continue soon!
Review By [Emeraldfire] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from EarnestScribbler
Review:
Small quibble -- I hate to nitpick -- Willow would have turned 18 some time before or during Season Four. Giles didn't buy the Magic Box until Season Five.
Review By [EarnestScribbler] • Date [10 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Great start
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [10 Feb 09] • Not Rated
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