Review of chapter "Welcome to the Jungle" from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting chapter, seems like Toshiro and Rangiku are a little ooc though. Please do your best to add more soon.
Who will be in the harem?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [4 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Jungle" from shadowalker
Review:
not bad so far thanks for posting.
Review By [shadowalker] • Date [3 Aug 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Jungle" from xon
Review:
A number of things to criticize;
1. An animal spirit has no need for human names; the hyena would probably call Xander 'pup' or something along those lines.
2. Hitsugaya makes a point of acting more mature than he actually is; even with his Vice-Captain. Which is why he ALWAYS calls her Matsumoto, and never by her given name.
Review By [xon] • Date [3 Aug 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Jungle" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [3 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Jungle" from IAMZIPPY
Review:
WHERE ARE THE BOOBIES I WAS PROMISED BOOBIES DAMMIT :)
Review By [IAMZIPPY] • Date [3 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Jungle" from ColdFuzzions
Review:
Interesting.
What sort of Spirits will he encounter in Africa?
Will any other famous names show up?
Is anyone else aware of him?
Cont when you can.
Review By [ColdFuzzions] • Date [3 Aug 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Am You and You Are Me" from JediKnight
Review:
Good work on the update. When might "Bleach" come in?
Comments from author:
The Bleach part Will tie in when he's in Africa more then the previous chapters, which was the back story to it all; Kinda.
-Sacred
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [21 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Am You and You Are Me" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Am You and You Are Me" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
The next chapter will be sent to my betas, hopefully by Wednesdays or Thursday if the powers allow it. That means by the beginning of next week the next chapter will be posted.
-Sacred
Review By [war] • Date [14 Mar 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]