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Review of chapter "Intoxicating" from Hecatonchires
Review:
My only issue is the prefight banter between Buffy and clone was so good, I wanted to see the whole fight
Comments from author:
Sorry to disappoint :( Action scenes are my weakest point, so I'm cautious about how I approach them. If Joss can cheat us by skipping out on fight scenes (I'm picturing the last stand in NFA), I feel that as a lesser writer I can wimp out too. I'll call it "freedom of artistic expression" ;)
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [22 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Intoxicating" from grd
Review:
That was pretty good. Needs a bit more minion bashing though before the big fight. Favorite part wa Buffy punching thru steel and Andrew's reaction.
Comments from author:
I can tell you have a discerning eye for detail...
Glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [grd] • Date [21 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Intoxicating" from Blackett
Review:
loved it
Review By [Blackett] • Date [21 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Intoxicating" from Tempi
Review:
A short, but great story. The videos made for a good soundtrack, while reading.

I look forward to reading other stories from you.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I was actually worried I might get sick of the songs while I was viewing the videos for the story :( Guess I'm too slow to realize I could have muted the videos and just watched the scenes over and over :)
Review By [Tempi] • Date [21 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breaking" from GypsyDruid
Review:
i sit here with my mouth gaping open, hoping, praying, and now writing this as a plea to please, Please, PLEASE...

keep this going.
Review By [GypsyDruid] • Date [26 Feb 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breaking" from TDWidow
Review:
Most caffeinated 2 am ideas aren't bad - I say continue!
Review By [TDWidow] • Date [17 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breaking" from (Past Donor)sopchoppy
Review:
Intrigued.
Review By [(Past Donor)sopchoppy] • Date [13 Feb 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breaking" from grd
Review:
That was marvelous. Loved how Buffy kept doing her thing and trashing Umbrella goons. Andrew's toys were fun too. Hope you do more.
Review By [grd] • Date [13 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breaking" from CPTSkip
Review:
Well, other than you killing Faith, all I can say about this story is COOL! But that ending was a bit of a cliffhanger, don't you think? I hope you write more to this story and we get to see the Scoobies fold up the Umbrella Corp.
Comments from author:
It wasn't me--it was my evil muse, honest. Blame Zomba Recording! If there was a brunette superheroine I would have used her, as I'm definitely not partial to Buffy (just check out how many of my fics she's missing from). I just saw the video and thought, "Hey, those guys are monsters. Is Britney supposed to be a slayer?" I'm actually surprised at all the positive reviews I've received.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breaking" from Richardthrnnsx
Review:
OK feed your muse, this is great, I have always had a guilty pleasure for RE. Feed your muse, feed me.

Thanks for sharing Richard3116
Comments from author:
Guilty pleasure for Resident Evil? Seriously? We watch BUFFY. We read FANFIC. I think your concerns are misplaced =) And thank you for taking the time to review.
Review By [Richardthrnnsx] • Date [13 Feb 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breaking" from Greywizard
Review:
A very nice adaptation of the video. Definitely want to see what's coming up next.
Comments from author:
I was hoping to find a quality follow-up video, but no luck. I've got a pretty good idea what the climactic scene is going to be, though.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breaking" from draconis
Review:
Excellent transmogrification of the video into the BVSverse.

Things like changing the CS grenade into a combo HW, silver dust, and pepper spray grenade were a nice touch. (although, I think inhaling silver dust can be toxic to humans...for arguments for and against, google silver toxicity )

Really liked the background and context you provided with the added characters.

Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the thoughtful review. I figure Andrew knows what he's about in his Q-guise...I'm definitely not going to try any of that! And remember, those slayers are tougher than us mere mortals. =)
Review By [draconis] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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