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Review of chapter "Baby in the Vegas Crime Lab" from WolfWriter
Review:
How about a ficlet where he goes to the GFFA, and ends up as the son of either General Maximilian Veers (Julian Glover) or Grand Moff Tarkin (Peter Cushing).

Our favorite Xander shaped hero, de-aged and brought up as an Imperial? How can it not be a good story?

Or, drop him in as a teenager, due to a wish by his so-called father, and go from there.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [11 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baby in the Vegas Crime Lab" from fayannr
Review:
I loved these ficlets. I do enjoy seeing Xander getting a new family, whatever his age. I hope you find more and post them. We probably wouldn't object if some of them are expanded to full stories. Please update soon!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [fayannr] • Date [8 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baby in the Vegas Crime Lab" from TurquoiseGirl
Review:
"Current Justice Demon for forgotten heroes," I like that. I had a good laugh at the "Bitchy and Witchy" part.
Review By [TurquoiseGirl] • Date [24 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baby in the Vegas Crime Lab" from neverwill
Review:
I love Cordy as a Vengeance Demon - she's certainly had enough happen to her to feel vengeful about. All these ficlets were quite interesting, and they all seem like pretty good bunnies for longer stories - there are never enough Xander gets a new family fics (whatever age he is).
Comments from author:
My feelings exactly! I love Xander getting a new family. There's even more of these breeding somewhere in my apartment. Thanks for the review!
Review By [neverwill] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Terror at the Hospital" from neverwill
Review:
They just get better & better! I love Xander House. I think even D'Hoffryn would love the chaos & payback this pair will generate.
Comments from author:
Exactly, just think of the snark levels and chaos that a chibi Xander will cause and then get out of with the Puppy Dog Eyes of Doom. Thanks for the review!
Review By [neverwill] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Home of a Whole Different Kind of Evil" from neverwill
Review:
Somebody made *Kendra* Xander's mother!? Can we have more of this one too?
Comments from author:
There's a sequel ficlet to this one brewing about Xander meeting the NCIS team *evil cackle* Thanks for the review.
Review By [neverwill] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "From Demons to Gators... Joy" from neverwill
Review:
Any chance of this growing up into a big story on its own? Xander would be like the love child of Speed & Horatio - Speed's mouth, and Horatio's frequency of self-endangerment!
Comments from author:
I don't know; it may but not right now. Thanks for the review!
Review By [neverwill] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baby in the Vegas Crime Lab" from Lyd
Review:
Awesome ficlets. I want to see more of the Cordy as a mommy. And more Greggo as daddy.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. I'm not sure where my plot bunnies will hop next.
Review By [Lyd] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baby in the Vegas Crime Lab" from Caliadragon
Review:
These two are wonderful and I love the addition of Cordy.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! She just kind of took over the Queen... Mommy?!?! chapter and decided to the the Justice Demon in the Vegas Crime Lab story.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baby in the Vegas Crime Lab" from spring
Review:
Oh, these are wonderful. I do have to admit though that the Queen Mommy story confused me a little, wasn't Xander turned back into a child? I thought that what who Cory was going to take care of so how/when did Xander get a kid that was going to be raised by his parents when he was the one that was going to be? Please continue with these extremely entertaining stories. ^_^
Comments from author:
Apparently I didn't write it clearly enough; Xander was de-aged into the baby but all the paperwork and DNA and stuff would show that the baby is the child of Xander Harris and Cordelia Chase. I'm glad you like the stories! Thank you for the review.
Review By [spring] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baby in the Vegas Crime Lab" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great update with very well written Cordelias.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for the review! Glad you enjoyed the ficlets.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baby in the Vegas Crime Lab" from LNR
Review:
These are all excellent and a few have further potential. More please.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for the review. These are all potential story ideas and plot bunnies that others are welcome to pick up and write.
Review By [LNR] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baby in the Vegas Crime Lab" from JediKnight
Review:
Good chapter, but, wish it was a little longer and explained how Xander got de-aged in his one.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. These are partial plot bunnies that are up for adoption, so that is up to whoever decides to write the full story.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baby in the Vegas Crime Lab" from kaleecat
Review:
Go Cordy. I love that you included her. I can just see Phantom Dennis babysitting for baby Alex. And I love the idea of her as the new Justice Demon for Forgotten Heroes -- she's perfect for the job, and for the job of tormenting witchy and bitchy. (hehehehe)
Comments from author:
I think she'd be the scariest vengeance demon ever. Thank you for the review!
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Queen... Mommy?!?!" from MavenAlysse
Review:
::Cackling gleefully:: O M G !!!
I'd love to see this continued. How will the Fang Gang react to a one year old Xander? How will poor Xander react to a broody vampire with a soul? Exactly what punishment shall Cordelia inflict upon the stupid sods who did this to her 'dweeb'? This could be a whole lot of fun.
Thanks for sharing!
-MavenAlysse
Comments from author:
You're quite welcome. Thank you for the review :-)
Review By [MavenAlysse] • Date [27 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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