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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from serenityselena
Review:
life will always be interesting for the 3 brothers ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [23 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Running is Something We've Always Done Well" from efphrim
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Really really really hoping there's going to be a sequel! Your writing is just so awesome and has the greatest flow. All the characters attitudes are spot on. It was an easy and enjoyable read, and I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Comments from author:
Your review was fantastic! I am so grateful to each and everyone of my readers especially for this story. This was one of my first chaptered fanfictions and I spend a lot of time trying to make everything flow and making sure I do the content and characters justice. I was planning on writing a sequel but life got in the way and I've turned my attention to original writing instead. However, since you seem to have such an interest in this, I have been inspired to get back into this fandom.

Thanks again for the great review!
Review By [efphrim] • Date [1 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from UncagedMuse
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Great fic. Enjoyed it muchly.
Review By [UncagedMuse] • Date [17 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from SarahLou
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That's the end? Seriously? *pouts* Is there going to be a sequel? I hope there's going to be a sequel! This fic was awesome!!! :-D

Xx
Comments from author:
Yeah. My problem is that I had at least three more chapters but they got deleted and I really didn't feel like rewriting them. I felt bad leaving you all hanging though so I decided to go ahead with the ending. I did have plans for a sequel but I haven't started writing it yet. Thanks so much for reviewing. I love to hear from people who read my stuff!
Review By [SarahLou] • Date [24 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)jcon
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Sorry, only just getting to read my updates. Great final chapter. Enjoyed the one on one with Dean. Certainly sets it up for another story ... don't it? Don't it? Anyway. Great story.
Review By [(Recent Donor)jcon] • Date [18 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from DebraN
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I was very happy to see this story finished. Xander's conversation with Yellow-Eyes was quite revealing. Now I'm wondering how long Xander is going to be able to keep those secrets. Can't wait to see how things develop with Xander thrown into the mix. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Comments from author:
Of course it'll all come to a head. It always does. Next story will actually take place after Dean's deal and it will have flashbacks to sort of show the brothers' tumultuous relationship once Sam realises what happened and all this other stuff. Thanks for the review and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Review By [DebraN] • Date [27 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Past Donor)severuswinchester
Review:
I liked the moment between Dean and Xander and how simple it all is in Dean's head - Xander's his youngest brother, and he's gonna protect him. I also like how this ended right in the thick of things. I am looking forward to reading the sequel.
Comments from author:
Lol. I actually asked my brother to get the appropriate reactions. It's pretty funny how it's actualy that simple in his head. Thanks for the review!
Review By [(Past Donor)severuswinchester] • Date [22 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Inside of Me" from (Past Donor)severuswinchester
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I like that old Yellow Eyes has a plan B, and that Xander is it. Exciting chapter that makes me wonder just what is in store for Xander and how his brothers will help him out as well as how he will help them. Dean's protective streak being activated by Tony's cruel words was a nice touch as well.
Comments from author:
Thanks so much. I think I made Dean too mean in the beginning so I had to fix it fast by giving him the token "big brother" moment. Thanks for the review and I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!
Review By [(Past Donor)severuswinchester] • Date [22 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Leeef
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It started out good but the ends seems a bit rushed. Xander doesn't seem like the kind of guy who would leave after his best friend got attacked. Even if he knew why she got attacked.


Edit: I get that writing some things is difficult. But you could at least mention it, like - Saying goodbye had been hard for Xander but his brother's weren't going stay so he couldn't either.
Comments from author:
I suppose that's true. I tried to write the goodbye scene but it was really tedious. Still, you could just imagine that it was just like every other goodbye scene...plus, Buffy's a Slayer. Do you really think he realises that she can't take care of herself?

But thanks for the criticism and I'll work on it for the sequel!
Review By [Leeef] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from PsychoWing
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Great story. I hope that there's a sequel in the works.
Review By [PsychoWing] • Date [19 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from RHatch
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awesome ending.... maybe a sequel....
Review By [RHatch] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Kirallie
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Um, wasn't there a lot more time between their Dad dying and Sam vanishing? Or did you just not show it? Or did the Demon speed things up with Plan B being around? Great story!!!!
Comments from author:
There was a lot more time between Daddy Winchester dying and Sam vanishing, like a whole season's worth. However, I really hate following dialogue and events in episodes for fanfictions. Because I feel like I've already seen it so why would I want to read it. So, you are right and you are the only one to notice. Just pretend that it's been a few weeks after Dad dies (sometime after Hunted, I think...) Anyways, thanks for noticing and I'll keep a better eye on timeline in the future.


You've been one of my stalwart reviewers and I can't tell you how much that means to me. So, thank you so much.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from msdarque
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Excellent chapter and intriguing for more!
Great ending.. after all, it is a Supernatural story. ;)
Congrats and kudos! I really like it and reading it has been a fantastic time. Eagerly waiting for the sequel.
Comments from author:
I was originally going to leave the story on a much happier note but like you said, it's a Supernatural story...there are no happy notes, just notes that are slightly less sad.

I'm eager to write the sequel as well. But I probably won't be posting it until September or October. I'm hoping I can write it all in a couple of months, spend some time editing and then post it.

Thank you very much for your many reviews! You can't even imagine how much it means to me that people enjoy this story.
Review By [msdarque] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Inside of Me" from msdarque
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Wow, exciting and wonderful.. liked it a lot. :D
Brothers no matter what, it seems. Good for Xander, he needs brothers.
(A sequel sounds amazing, yay!)
Congrats!
Comments from author:
Thanks so much! I'm really proud that I finished this story and I've two more stories in this series that are on their way. Plus a mini-story following the events of All Hell Breaks Loose. There will lots of brother torture happening but in the end...family is what matters.
Review By [msdarque] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Inside of Me" from RHatch
Review:
great update...
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [RHatch] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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