Hey, I really enjoy this story and I hope to be able to read more, but it's been so long since you updated... =(
Please keep this story alive! I'm really interested in this plot. I've never read anything quite like it before.

Hey-OH! Will there be a new chapter soon? Please say yes!

You started really well!

Hope Faith gets an abortion.

wow!!!!

I can't wait to read more....

I wonder how Jack will handle the fact that faith is pregnant and that her mom was a drunk and abusive to her....

keep up on the great work......

I can't wait to read more of this...it looks like its going to be really good.

Love the idea. Wish there was more.

Thanks, there is more, it's just being stubborn about letting me write it at the mo - halfway through the next chapter though, so watch this space :-)

Sarah x

Very interesting and gritty beginning. I'm hoping you'll continue this soon. Also hoping, please don't shoot me, that Faith won't have to give birth to a baby while she's still one herself...

She and Jack should be a riot. I do so hope she'll become a slayer at some point... Though I don't want Kendra to die permanently either...

Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with this.

Peace

Blue

Thanks, I'm hoping to write some more of this soon - my exams are over in a few weeks so should finally have some time spare.

Sarah x

Y'know, this is a nice break from all those Faith-gets-turned-into-a-little-kid-from-a-spell-and-her-dad/uncle/relative-just-happens-to-be-Jack stories. Plus, I was reading another fanfiction (I think it was something about Teal'c making a wish and Xander and Faith joining SG-1), and Xander (or the author, through Xander), made a good point. Buffy was Chosen at 15ish, pretty late right? The age was anywhere from puberty onwards, and Faith had just been Chosen when she appeared in Sunnydale, so she was either Buffy's age of a few years younger, had just lost her watcher and was the outcast. And since you say this fic is a few years before her Choosing, I don't think this is at all ooc. Plus, the best part is that this is early in SGC cannon, so I can re-watch the episodes (I have seasons 1-9) and nitpick ;p. Thought, since Faith isn't a slayer (or will she get chosen when Buffy dies for Dawn? Wouldn't that be funny. Though, without Faith, how is Graduation going to go? Isn't Kennedy the next Potential in line?), she won't be helping out right? will she go the Jackson way and be language-girl?
RHR

Still enjoying this story and looking forward to their meeting... any chance we'll get an update any time soon? Please (I don't want to be a bother and I know RL has a way of getting in the way but it's been over a month and I'd hate to see this fic abandoned!)

It's not abandoned...just been ill and now gotta catch up on everything I missed in uni before the easter hols...should definately be a few updates once the next two weeks are over with :-)

Sarah x

Not much to go on so far, but it seems like a good start and I'm looking foreword to more!

Very interesting so far. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

The only thing I found 'unbelievable' was the part where the military gave out Jack's address and phone number! However, this is a story so we can let it slide. Just a suggestion maybe you could have had Faith do some research in a public library or something...whatever.

This is a nice story, well written and with good characterisation. Your 'young' Faith is quite believable to me, your Jack? Well. he's not said a lot yet so I'll reserve judgment until later. The idea that Faith is Jack's niece is an original one (I don't think I've seen that before).

This is good work especially if its your first fic, please keep it up and finish your story. Putting this on 'track' now.

DaveT.

Great start!

This is good so far. I like what you're doing with the characters, in a good story telling kind of way, not a liking the events kind of way, and this chapter is particularly good. I like the pre-slayer Faith approach and the characterization is very good so far, and I think it could work very well with Kendra not dying and Faith not being called. At the same time, I like slayer Faith and I was thinking, she was probably 15 or 16 when she was called, since she's younger than Buffy, who was 17 when Kendra died. That basically means that none of this has to mess with her calling, and no decision has to be made on the matter at the moment, since this theoretically still fits with cannon Faith (other than the pregnancy, but really, who knows?). Like i said, it would work well either way, I'm just presenting the case that you can investigate and explore pre-calling Faith in this manner, as you are doing very well with so far, and still have the plot elements later of being called to interact with any changes to the character that have happened with this plot line.
It's a good story, you are writing it very well and I am interested to see where you take it, even if I do like the dimension slayerness brings.

Awesome, a little short for my tastes, but to each his own.