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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Mwhahahaha
Defiantly liking this story...I really hope you come back to this soon...I can't wait to read more of this!
Review By [Mwhahahaha] • Date [4 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from TouchoftheWind
Its an interesting start- I hope you finish this some time.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [1 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from betrayal
Hey, I just found this story. And it's great. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [betrayal] • Date [21 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)Anaraine
Hmn... interesting. I'll admit, I'm not fond of Andrew. Or, if I am fond of him, it's in the 'oh-look-at-the-irritating-little-puppy' way. But the way you've hit this off... I can believe that Andrew was a Winchester. I can't even believe I'm saying that! When I first saw that tagline "An Andrew Winchester Story" I was pretty much in the denial land of 'hell no'. Glad I decided to give it a try, anyways.

Right, so first off, I like your writing style. I feel like you're hitting the imagery just right - not too much, and not too little. Great adjectives, words that fit nicely into the story, keeping to third person, dropping background information without overloading our senses - just great. It makes me feel all mushy inside when my inner editor doesn't come flying out with a vengeance. So, yay for you. If you ever decide to move into original writing, let me know and I'll cheerfully buy your books.

Plot-wise, I think it's great that Xander is the only one who took Andrew somewhat seriously. Well, that's not quite right. I don't think it's great that the Scoobies automatically dismissed him, but I think that Xander would probably be the one to give Andrew's story a smidgen of ...belief, I suppose, and actually ask for further information. After all, Xander is the one who could most relate, right? I don't want to say that Xander puts on a "mask" all the time either, because I don't think he does... but he's the one who could understand playing up a feature to make other people more at ease/underestimate him. Anyways, I'm happy that he at least made an effort to look closer. I'd be pleased as punch to see their relationship developed further. (Even if it looks like Andrew is going away forever...?)

Also, I think you hit Bobby perfectly. And you did with only dialog from over the phone! You amazing person you. And the "daddy issues" oooh, I can see the angst in my computer screen already. There's probably a prequel to this, I'll have to go find it when I'm done, here... Anyways, an A+ on the Supernatural side of things, since Bobby's lines hit me like a punch to the gut, and Andrew's musings were very much in tune with the sounds of Supernatural as a whole.

So, as I said earlier, you convinced me. I could carry around a little card with me that says "Andrew's a Winchester!" because I'm firmly on your side of the fence now. Geez, I'm going to keep thinking he's a little mastermind in other stories now, too. That's going to be confusing.

I'm very much looking forward to the rest of it... and the differences Andrew could make to the Supernatural series as a whole. One of those lovely "what-if" pieces... Can one person make the difference? Since Andrew does know bits and pieces of magic (probably more then he lets on), would it be possible for him to heal Dean without the help of the YED? If so, what would John's presence contribute to the series? And so-on, and so-forth. You've got me hooked, darling!
Comments from author:
Well, damn, thanks so much for all the thought and effort in your review of the story. If you didn't notice I'm a bit more in tune with my SPN side than BtVS side. *heh* I'm also glad I brought you over to the Andrew side, though, I have to admit, there have been more than a few times that I felt the writers were out to make him the most annoying guy on the face of the earth. I always thought that considering everything he's been through there should have been more growth in his maturity and how he related to others and this is just my way of giving back. :)

As for Bobby, he's a man that says what he needs to say and generally doesn't beat around the bush if he can help it. It's what I like about him and am glad you feel that I've nailed him. Also, to be honest, Andrew wouldn't be a real hunting Winchester if he didn't have daddy issues. Besides, it was easier to make him a Winchester than it was to make him the ultimate scifi goofy dork. I can do partial goofy dork but I lack that extra dork 'umph'.

Oh and as for the questions you posed: Thanks for those! I kept writing myself into walls the way I was going and having those questions addressed again helped throw some fresh ideas into my head. So I'm glad you took a chance and that I've managed to get you hooked. :D
Review By [(Recent Donor)Anaraine] • Date [28 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)GACTsevil
Wow, so now I'm curious and want to read more.
Comments from author:
I'm glad I got ya hooked and I hope I won't disappoint ^_^
Review By [(Past Donor)GACTsevil] • Date [21 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from anonyMouse
Loving it so far xD I love how he doesn't go running to the Scoobies straight away after the phone call with Bobby! Winchester pride all the way, baby. Haha! I can't wait for more, I was so happy to see this wonderful fic updated.
Comments from author:
Thanks, m'dear! It's all about the Winchester! *heh*
Review By [anonyMouse] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from FAITHFUL
Why did he leave his family in the first place? What happened?
Love it so far, please update soon!!
Comments from author:
So glad you like it!

As for why Andrew left his family, it had a lot to do with him trying to find a purpose for himself and wanting to belong. If you'd like, check out part one
Review By [FAITHFUL] • Date [12 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AmethystSiri
Great beginning, I am looking forward to the next chapter :)
Comments from author:
Thank you very much!
Review By [AmethystSiri] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Kirallie
WHy is he running? Surely he realises that the Council could help? Surely Willow could whip up something to help Dean? And they could help look for the demon? At least Xander's seeing him for who he is. WIll he track Andrew down? How did John find him and why did he never contact him?
Comments from author:
So many good questions and I hope I'll be able to adequately answer them in the next chapter :)
Thanks for the review!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [9 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Waverly
I love this series so far, please update again soon.
So did one of the Scoobies get dragged along with Andrew?
Comments from author:
Thank you :) As for any other Scoobie involvement, I don't wanna say ;P *grins*
Review By [Waverly] • Date [9 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FAITHFUL
Don´t stop writing this story. I want to know how Bobby knew that Andrew was in Sunnydale and if his family knew as well. Don´t leave me hanging.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing, m'dear. This next chapter will answer your question and I hope it continues to keep you engaged. ^_^
Review By [FAITHFUL] • Date [10 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kristal
Oh now there is a cliffhanger. Very nice. You got the story writing all down too- yay, should an interesting one at that! Hope you update soon! Continue ASAP! WRITE NOW!
Comments from author:
LOL! Thanks again and I'm working on it!
Review By [Kristal] • Date [16 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ScreamingFlamingos
I am seriously loving this fic of yours! I am demanding more! :-) I have always loved Andrew, and have been upset that quite a lot of authors 'type-cast' him as the inept gay man, so I am really really really loving your portrayal of Andrew here. I'm glad he isn't inept, but surprisingly deceptive! And if he is still gay, please don't make him the stereotype gay that is just frustrating to read please! And holy cow! I am dying to see why Bobby called him!!! It must be something serious, so you had better get your butt, muse, plot bunnies, etc. in gear, cuz I WANT MORE SOON! please? :-) Pretty please with an Andrew on top? ;-)
Comments from author:
With an Andrew on top? heh There's an image I wasn't prepared for 8D lol I'm workin on it, doll, I'm workin' on it. ;)
Review By [ScreamingFlamingos] • Date [16 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kalika
Wow! I'm actually kinda in love with this. I really hope you update soon. Well done!
Comments from author:
Thanks tons! :D
Review By [Kalika] • Date [15 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SarahLou
Love this! Haven't read many andrew-centric stories, but can't wait to read more of this one xx
Comments from author:
Thank you very much :D and I hope to have more soon. ;)
Review By [SarahLou] • Date [15 Feb 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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