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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
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Oh come on, Mad's didn't kick the Brooder in the nadjers?

Great writing, with lots of possibilities.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [15 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Irene
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This is very good- Madders has a very distinctive voice, and the premise is novel. Just one thing- Madeleine referring to the nurse as "Missus" is jarring. A girl like her- a nice girl from a middle-class home, with a father like Roger Wyndham-Pryce, would be far more likely to say "Ma'am." Missus has disrespectful overtones- "Oi! Missus!" instead of "Excuse me, ma'am."

Other than that, this is great, and I look forward to seeing it continued.
Review By [Irene] • Date [18 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Miranda
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I like it so far, and I do enjoy the fact that you can almost read a British accent into the way the girl is speaking. I look forward to seeing you update.
Review By [Miranda] • Date [17 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
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I take it that's Angel she's talking to? Heh. From what I recall, Gunn / Wesley were there also; otherwise he might have killed Wesley.
He was in a real rage over what W. had done. Great scene. This is certainly a moment in W's life when he needs a friend, as this is when the entire team turned their backs on him.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [17 Feb 09] • Not Rated
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