Interesting story so far!

It is not fair! Please come back to this!

I am quite enjoying this story, and I hope that, at some point, you are able to continue it. The idea of Willow being de-aged and making friends with Mini Jack is really good. I hope they get together soon. Jack's reaction to finding out that Willow was in her twenties would be really funny to read about.

R.W.

HUh, wish there was more. Well, thanks for writing what you did of this, bye for now.

I really hope you will continue this story. I find it very interesting and I love the Idea of Jack and Willow:)

You have just got to update this as soon as you can. Need to read how things turn out for them all. Great writing.

I love it. More soon please.

Thanks :)

Enjoyed this. Glad to see more of ths story.

Thanks for bringing back the character of Ally (Teal'c's friend from when he nearly turned into a giant insect) -- I'd almost forgotten about her, but putting her together with Mini-Jack and de-aged Willow is a promising start.

i like,

would have reviewed sooner but RL is getting in the way a little

thanks for sharing

yep, her biggest problem is no real parent or guardian where she lives. Sooner or later that's going to come out--she gets stopped by a cop over something, or gets sick and has to go home, or the school notices no parent ever answers the phone etc etc. But that might take a while to happen. She should have a background set up, ie paperwork showing Giles as her guardian or something like that.
Does she have a plan or is she just waiting for something interesting to pop up? Just wondering...
* In a weird sort of way she's now in the same position that Amy's mom was in--repeating high school in a younger body... will she realize that at any point?

Thank you for a very enjoyable read! I'm very much looking forward to read the rest when you get a chance to post it. Keep up the great work!

Also, from the looks of the hits and reviews, I think you could probably do away with the usual 'Please R&R', folks are already doing that. ;-)

Edited to add: It's great to see someone bringing Ally into a story! I thought she was a neat kid in "Bane" and I'm glad to see her back in the action. Thanks!

Perhaps the vamps don't drain their victims, hence the low death rate.
Willow should consider changing her appearance a little for her night patrols.

Yay! more chapters to read. I'm loving this story and I can't wait till Jack and Willow meet.....
Keep up the great work.