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Review of chapter "In The Dark? Well, Turn On The Light!" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Yep, would really appreciate it if you started updating it again...
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [11 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In The Dark? Well, Turn On The Light!" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Please do ***MORE***!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In The Dark? Well, Turn On The Light!" from TwoBlackDragons
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I'm not sure whether you addressed this in the series or not as this time through I'm only reading this one. You do know that Buffy's real name is Buffy don't you? The Elizabeth is fanon not canon.

BTW you're still being an Evil Author\Muse. :)
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [28 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In The Dark? Well, Turn On The Light!" from TwoBlackDragons
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Still being an Evil Author\Muse

+*+* +*+* +*+*+ *+*+ *+*+ *+*+ *+ *+*+ *+* +*+

Evil Author\Muse = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a terrific story, so please stop being one of the Evilest of Authors\Muses.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [9 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In The Dark? Well, Turn On The Light!" from Obsidian
Review:
hmm thats along Next time. but I hope you continue this. I like it so far.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [21 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In The Dark? Well, Turn On The Light!" from TwoBlackDragons
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Evil author = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a terrific story, so please stop being one of the evilest of authors.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [8 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In The Dark? Well, Turn On The Light!" from SmithAndWesson
Review:
Like what I've read so far. Interested in seeing more at some point... any chance of further postings? Haven't read the other stories but I saw that Faith is supposed to be a vamp too or did I read that wrong? Maybe I'll have to go back and read the other stories as well.
Review By [SmithAndWesson] • Date [18 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "City of... Buffy?" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Well, you always have the choice of another crossover to pair up Buffy. I'm not seeing Gunn or Kate a match.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In The Dark? Well, Turn On The Light!" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
...Interesting, I'll give it that.

True, I'd have preferred it if you'd had Buffy and Kate just being friends for a BIT longer before starting the relationship- it just seems like they're diving into being involved with a woman after spending so long dating men a bit TOO fast, really-, but the potential involved in having a variation of VampWillow fighting on Buffy's side should be interesting to witness, so in general it all balances out.

Plus, of course, you're keeping Angel involved in at least a minor capacity; still wish he was actually ALIVE- in the sense of having his own body-, but it's still him, so that's something.

So... just out of curiosity, will you be redoing "I Fall to Pieces" next chapter (That was always one of my favourite "Angel" episodes)?
Comments from author:
As a matter of fact, I'm in the middle of it now. AtS was less 'arc' heavy than BTVS, so I can take it episode by episode.

And, if you look, I've left explanations for Buffy's OOC behavior. Wesley mentioned that, even though they have souls, this new breed of vampires are very in tune with their baser instincts. It's not as apparent in Buffy because she's used to dealing with the Slayer Essence, which is a dark entity. However, little things, like not caring about gender, come out once in a while.

And as for Angel... Hehe. Stick around. It's gonna be a good show, hopefully.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [8 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In The Dark? Well, Turn On The Light!" from Terapsina
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I have no problem whatsoever with Vampire Willow as long as she stay's together with Oz. I mean he was the nicest guy, and then suddenly he had to go and find control (which he has by the way here already) and then Willow was already taken and Oz had to leave again. I mean he was practically the only one who never got to have at least a partially happy ending (the second would be Spike, I mean if the writer doesn't like Spuffy they don't give him any other person to love him back. You at least partially killed him).
Now that I'm done bitching, I have to say that I look forward seeing how you deal with this show without Angel himself. Just so you know I'm glad you killed him, never liked his always broody attitude.
Maybe you could even get Lindsay to become good, without that hate of Angel he would have stopped always returning to W&H.
Anyway update soon, because this is one story I'm not about to stop reading for any reason whatsoever.
P.S. You should change that Superslayer title to either Immortal Slayer or Sired Slayer.

...Good Luck...
Comments from author:
Well... I don't know... I mean, I like Oz. He's one of the most 'together' characters in the show. But, on the other hand, Willow becoming Gay was a big part of her character... I had a few ideas about that, to be honest.

We'll just have to see what happens. This stuff takes on a life of it's own.

And I'm using 'Slayer Vampire' now. Those are good, though. Might work one of them in.

And the final point: Lindsay. He's going to be fun for me. That's all I'll say.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [Terapsina] • Date [5 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In The Dark? Well, Turn On The Light!" from thales
Review:
So vamp!Willow is back in town but this time on the more or less good side..

How will Xander react to this makeover of his old friend?

Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
*sigh* Unfortunately, Xander's next chapter is giving me a little trouble... Stupid writer's block.

Thanks for the words of encouragment, though. It's always appreciated.
Review By [thales] • Date [2 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In The Dark? Well, Turn On The Light!" from cjcold
Review:
Nice chapter.

Though how much time has elapsed since the second chapter. Kate and Buffy seemed to alright with involving each other in the others business with that arrest. As well as having some fun on the stake-out. If they have gotten that far do Kates co-workers know about the relationship, what about her father.

Don't know if the whole turning Willow idea is smart, but then I was never a fan of darkside Willow in the show either.

Is Cordelia still persuing an acting career. Has Wesley compiled his Watchers library yet, especially with how many resources Buffy now has.

More soon please.
Comments from author:
In order: A week or so. They've been patrolling together every night, so the dynamic formed.

Kate's coworkers know nothing. Neither does her father.

VAMP WILLOW FOREVER!

I'm saying she's acting as a hobby.

And Wesley is book boy. He's got nothing better to do.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [cjcold] • Date [1 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In The Dark? Well, Turn On The Light!" from eriktheviking
Review:
Wow! A great vamp Willow.
Comments from author:
Heh. Thanks, man. Of course, anything with Willow in leather is pretty much a win.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [1 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In The Dark? Well, Turn On The Light!" from OnyxWraith
Review:
Damn... Oh Hell Yeah!!!!!!! This rocks! keep it up my friend.
Comments from author:
Heh. Thanks. And I have every intention.
Review By [OnyxWraith] • Date [1 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In The Dark? Well, Turn On The Light!" from Bobboky
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I think you should make her borderline MPD. Have her act like Vamp Willow when she gets really mad, confused or otherwise stressed out and revert to normal Willow when things are more normal for her... Kinda like instead of having her hair turn black she gets vampy when she is mad.
Comments from author:
That's what I was going for, yeah. I mean, other than feeling more confident all around. She can't exactly go cold turkey on having a demon bonded to her soul, so it'll come out more often, and in smaller ways, than Darth Willow did.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [1 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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