I love this would like to know if you plan any more chapters as its brilklant shes being lkept on the straight andd narrow by a brother who can help but be uber protective and dominant...,.. and nobody will know she is the slayer
xxx
Comments from author:
Im not sure i left it open just in case because i would like to write more on it, i just have to see if it'll come to me thanks for the review!
Ali
Review By [yakuit] • Date [5 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I know this story is complete - and its kind of short - But boy its got punch - and would love to know where this would lead. The thought of faith being babysat by a possessive big brother who has no idea she is a slayer and the curiorisity of the vamps .... has so much to offer.
anyhow I love all your stories - you are a cool dude! (lady dude)
Comments from author:
lol we like being cool thank you! I love Fredo-or at least my Fredo-we don't see him that much in the book, i do want to continue on the Baby Lost, i have one chapter written for a story or a drabble haven't had a chance to really sit down and think about it but i will this weekend so here is to hoping!
Thanks for reading
Ali
Review By [yakuit] • Date [30 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I read the Anita Blake series and I don't recognize the name 'Fredo' ... who is he? Otherwise a really good story.
Comments from author:
Fredo is one of Anita's Gaurds he's introduced in NCC i think or the book after he's one of Rafael's were-rats and Anita describes him as a walking weapons store
Review By [Allyssiandra] • Date [14 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Oh I would love to read more about this! Fredo is such an underused character....not to mention the Were-Rats. I hope you'll think about updateing with more chapters.
Comments from author:
i really want to, we'll see how it goes, thanks for reading!
Ali
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [20 Feb 09] • Not Rated
