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Investigating the Bones

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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Letomo
Review:
An interesting story. I felt you really got the characters of the Bones show well, and a reasonable interpolation of where Xander might be. I do wish it had been continued.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [21 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [24 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Past Donor)CallmemasterKent
Review:
This is, well, very good. I like seeing Bones from a Xander-tastic angle. I think you're really onto something here.


Lovely work.

MJ
Review By [(Past Donor)CallmemasterKent] • Date [21 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
AHahahahaha! That was perfect. I love the interaction and Xanders amusement to the attempted intimidation. I would laugh too. After the horrors of Sunnydale they're puppies. LOL I really wanna know more and I hope you update soon.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [17 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from firedrakegirl
Review:
More soon please!!!!!!!!! Love it!!!!!!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [26 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
Hee, hee smiles with glee. Poor Xander they should have sent Willow. Love this so far.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [26 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AnimeRonin
Review:
Xander and Angela... now there's something that'd be fun to see (and Hodgins being snippy about it). Also it's somewhat curious that Xander's not wanting blood - sure, the girls are not his Slayers personally but it's something he might take offense to.
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from copycatloki
Review:
This reads really great and I'm curious to see how it will continue X3
Review By [copycatloki] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Ghostrider
Review:
First time I've read this story and it's been very enjoyable so far. To recap, seemingly, a bunch of Slayers were kidnapped, tortured and finally killed, most probably in a ritual of some sort.

The Bones team is on the case and since it was flagged, the Council sent in Xander to 'observe'. And as per usual, we've got Seeley not liking having to share with other agencies, Brennan and Co. demanding information etc. Of course, Xander can't reveal anything until they've come to their own conclusions.

A pretty good setup and so far, you seem to have the Bones characters down pretty well. Even the stilted way Temperance acts is conveyed rather nicely. Xander I can't comment on, since he's been only shown sporadically in the second chapter. Although, I'm surprised he didn't have more of a reaction to Booth.

I'm looking forward to reading more of this, when you get the time and inspiration to write it.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Oh, so I thought the mauve and blue woman was Illyria up until you mentioned the demon-like enlargement of her mandible (jaw/teeth?), so now I'm thinking she was a demon/part-demon that had been called as a Slayer? :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Cool story so far.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from IrishBlue
Review:
Very interesting start. I'd love to read more of this story. Please update soon.
Review By [IrishBlue] • Date [8 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spikeismine
Review:
Awesome. I can't wait to see where you go with this. Please update soon.
Review By [spikeismine] • Date [20 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
OMG this was great and very very detailed. Wow and again I say WOW. I thought for sure that Xander was going to say Willow read Tempie's book, but SPIKE read it! ROFL that was priceless. I would love if you continued this.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [1 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TexasAries
Review:
I would like to see what happens as well.
Comments from author:
I'm writing the next chapter so we'll see how it goes.
Review By [TexasAries] • Date [23 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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