This is, well, very good. I like seeing Bones from a Xander-tastic angle. I think you're really onto something here.


Lovely work.

MJ

AHahahahaha! That was perfect. I love the interaction and Xanders amusement to the attempted intimidation. I would laugh too. After the horrors of Sunnydale they're puppies. LOL I really wanna know more and I hope you update soon.

More soon please!!!!!!!!! Love it!!!!!!

Hee, hee smiles with glee. Poor Xander they should have sent Willow. Love this so far.

Xander and Angela... now there's something that'd be fun to see (and Hodgins being snippy about it). Also it's somewhat curious that Xander's not wanting blood - sure, the girls are not his Slayers personally but it's something he might take offense to.

This reads really great and I'm curious to see how it will continue X3

First time I've read this story and it's been very enjoyable so far. To recap, seemingly, a bunch of Slayers were kidnapped, tortured and finally killed, most probably in a ritual of some sort.

The Bones team is on the case and since it was flagged, the Council sent in Xander to 'observe'. And as per usual, we've got Seeley not liking having to share with other agencies, Brennan and Co. demanding information etc. Of course, Xander can't reveal anything until they've come to their own conclusions.

A pretty good setup and so far, you seem to have the Bones characters down pretty well. Even the stilted way Temperance acts is conveyed rather nicely. Xander I can't comment on, since he's been only shown sporadically in the second chapter. Although, I'm surprised he didn't have more of a reaction to Booth.

I'm looking forward to reading more of this, when you get the time and inspiration to write it.

Oh, so I thought the mauve and blue woman was Illyria up until you mentioned the demon-like enlargement of her mandible (jaw/teeth?), so now I'm thinking she was a demon/part-demon that had been called as a Slayer? :)

Cool story so far.

Very interesting start. I'd love to read more of this story. Please update soon.

Awesome. I can't wait to see where you go with this. Please update soon.

OMG this was great and very very detailed. Wow and again I say WOW. I thought for sure that Xander was going to say Willow read Tempie's book, but SPIKE read it! ROFL that was priceless. I would love if you continued this.

I would like to see what happens as well.

I'm writing the next chapter so we'll see how it goes.

Yes definitely continue. I like the premise, and the characterization. So far you have the start of great story, therefore, onward!

Thank you, I'm writing the next chapter but it's coming a little slow.

Hmmm interesting start. I love Bones crossovers. I can't wait to see how Xander influences the team. And how Brennan reacts to the magic bit. Till the next chapter!

Thank you, this story is moving along a bit slow, so updates will be sporadic at best.