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Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from loretta

Review:

this is a great story! please update it soon

Comments from author:

Thanks! I actually started the next chapter... But it's on my broken tablet... Didn't finish it because I found a mistake I gotta fix in the published chapters... No one noticing the mistake made me unmotivated to work on this. I've got the story planned out though. Once I finish my new stories this will be the one I go back to work on.

Review By [loretta] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from Blackett

Review:

I got back to this and reread it. Awsome. Hope there will be some updates in the future.

Comments from author:

Thanks. I actually started the next chapter and realized I had made conflicting scenes in previous chapters. *sigh* When I fix that I'll update this story. Please look forward to it.

Review By [Blackett] • Date [17 Apr 13] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from (Current Donor)

nerfherder

Review:

Yeah, definitely worth continuing. I hope you get back to it some day.

Review By [ (Current Donor)

nerfherder] • Date [24 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from jgoodman

Review:

Great chapter, love this story and can't wait to read more

Comments from author:

Aw~ Thanks! I've actually written the next chapter... Just need to proofread it.

Review By [jgoodman] • Date [4 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from Mordare

Review:

Always glad to see an update. Love the story.

Comments from author:

Thanks! I'm working on the next chapter now. So hopefully another update soon. ;-)

Review By [Mordare] • Date [20 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from Dragonwolftiger

Review:

I just caught up with my stories after two weeks of little to no internet, darn dsl cable. So far so good on the search for Xander. Great story please continue as you are able ( which means ---- if you aren't happy with a chapter don't post it 'till you are ).

Comments from author:

I'm glad you liked my updates. I actually found a mistake in the story that I have to fix before I start the next chapter. I think I know what I want to do to fix it so I'll hopefully be working on updating this soon.

Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [11 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from Morgomir

Review:

Great chapters. Keep up the good work.

Comments from author:

Thanks! I'm gonna try to update this, again, tomorrow. ^_^

Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from zxusof

Review:

Wow. Jack should know better. He just guaranteed that such a situation will come about quickly. Unless...Clever Jack! It's exactly what he wanted. The ability to tell his people what's going on without worrying about red tape. Crafty old man.

Comments from author:

I... I think you've inspired a scene in the next chapter. Thanks! ^_^

Review By [zxusof] • Date [3 May 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from ChaosLady

Review:

Wow. An explanation. Wonderful! Update soon!

Comments from author:

There was an explanation wasn't there? I can't help but wonder if it made you go into shock? I've been so evil with all my cliffhangers, not explaining stuff, etc. I'll try to update again soon and I'll hopefully explain lots more stuff in it too. ^_~

Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [3 May 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from MistofRainbows

Review:

I liked the scene. Now they just have to figure out how to find Loki :)

Comments from author:

Loki is so slippery too.~

Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [3 May 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from Eureka

Review:

Sounds pretty spot on to me. Jack WOULD have problems trying to explain things to SG1, specially since he is NOT to say anything about demons and such...but having to work together with others he did OK at most times.

Comments from author:

I'm glad you think it's spot on. ^_^ I'm not sure how such a conversation would go at the moment either... O_o;;;

Review By [Eureka] • Date [3 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from Greywizard

Review:

Okay, first off, I'm delighted to hear you intend to update as often as possible. ;-)

Second, I like the way you handled the reveal on both sides, and I think it's quite reasonable for Jack to open up after he learned that one of teh Scoobies' group was cloned, in much the same way Jon was.

Looking forward to seeing more of this. ;-)

Comments from author:

Thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, reviews remind me why I should update more frequently too. ^_~

Review By [Greywizard] • Date [3 May 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from RevDorothyL

Review:

I love it when the good guys can come together and work things out. :)

Comments from author:

I was worried I was making them come together and work things out too easily. So I'm glad you loved it.

Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [3 May 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from CageFire

Review:

Nice new chapter, keep up the good work. :)

Comments from author:

Thanks! ^_^

Review By [CageFire] • Date [3 May 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from RevDorothyL

Review:

Hurray for Jon being alive and in the story. Looking forward to seeing where you go next with this story.

Comments from author:

^_^ I really like Jon. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [1 May 12] • Not Rated