Okay, I have to admit you've done something I would have thought impossible. Normally I think of Angel as either a self-righteous prick who annoys me or a self-righteous prick who outright pisses me off (see original version of high school graduation for that one). But you've managed to write an Angel who is pretty much the same person, but I actually like him. Probably because he's being more father/big brother type thing to Xander and less 'oh poor, pitiful me', but I could be wrong...
Review By [XanthLove] • Date [14 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Damn good, but please please please change the summary for this one. I've avoided this fic for over a year until now, despite loving your other fics. I mean, seriously, it's several chapters of great writing, and the summary ('When Xander confronts Angel in season one, calling him a pedophile, everything changes.') was cringeworthy enough to keep me away? Was the p-word the only important part of the story that it needed a place in the summary? Great writing carries great responsibility, that of letting the maximum number of people possible read it so that they can tell you what a terrific writer you are and thank you for taking the time to write such great stuff. Instead, I was... Oh, please change the summary.
Comments from author:
I wrote that summary when I only had chapter one written, and the p-word was a pretty bit part of the early part of the story arc. However, you're right that compared to the entire story, it's not a biggie. I did change the intro.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [13 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Devil in the Details" from BlazeVein
Review:
OMG. Brilliant! I laugh so hard that I wake my mom and piss her off. Ha ha. Spike and Xander duologue's are so hilarious XD The 'hair' and 'Dorito-couch' 'and cool' XD
Review By [BlazeVein] • Date [25 Nov 10] • Not Rated
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