this is really well written and i really liked it. i like how you used the books and not the movie seeing it is not the best resource. but back to the point, i like where your going with this. please keep it up. and i look forward to reading the rest when you post a new chapter. good luck.
Review By [Leannachan] • Date [2 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Fantastic start. I can't wait to see where you go with this, though I really hope Dawn doesn't die in the end; it seems like such a waste. *crosses fingers*
Review By [Trace] • Date [24 Feb 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]