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Review of chapter "*We Interrupt This Story for a Brief Announcement*" from Xinkamujer
Review:
Damn, you had to make this into a novella triangle, ha ha, jk. Anyways, it's a good story especially since we need more pcp up in the mix. I like how sofia brings up her familia that's, dope. Anyways, I hope you are able to comeback and continue the story. Hasta Luego !!!!
Comments from author:
'novella triangle' - heehee ;)

Thank you *so* much for reading & reviewing! This fic was my first one ever & never got a lot of love, especially now compared to my other stories, so there's a part of me that has given up on it...but then last month I watched The Hobbit trailer & now I'm back to remembering why I was once obsessed with LOTR :D I'm hoping to come back to this one...

Gracias!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [Xinkamujer] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "*We Interrupt This Story for a Brief Announcement*" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Not a bad bit of work you’ve got here, really.

Making an OC the main character in something like this would normally be risky, but you use it fairly well, including such diverse issues as Sofia’s initial problem with the language of Middle-Earth, as well as including such interesting details from her history as her encounters with that ‘Damian’ guy.

On the Middle-Earth front, the idea of Thuringwethil created an interesting Middle-Earth-themed vampire- although I find the Valar’s attempts to ‘intervene’ in Sofia and Elladan’s relationship suspicious-, and the consequences of Eric’s return should definitely be interesting to explore in more detail.

Hope you continue this story soon.
Comments from author:
Hey Marcus, thanks for the review :)

Don't know how I missed this, but I'm guessing it was when TtH wasn't sending to my gmail account and I had to switch to Yahoo.

This was my first fanfic ever so the feedback is wholly appreciated. Back then I didn't know the rules of using an OC or even first-person writing and the reception they typically got in the fanfic world. Thus, I am glad you think this works fairly well.

I do want to finish this story someday...I think I got a bit carried away with the fic and there's a couple things I wish I would have done differently now. However, I still like the story and hate leaving things unfinished, so hopefully one day...

Thank you :)
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "*We Interrupt This Story for a Brief Announcement*" from (Recent Donor)curiouslywombat
Review:
Thank you - I wondered whether you had been too busy, been distracted from it by something else, lost interest, or were having plot problems. It's good to know that you are going to go back, regroup, and then continue, as I have enjoyed it so much up to now.
Comments from author:
Thanks Wombat, I appreciate the support. I had realized that I needed to regroup and then I got distracted by some other stories in the Harry Potter and Anita Blake genres and haven't been as LOTRiffic feeling. But it makes me happy hearing that you want it to be continued! I will be doing so :)

Thanks,
Luna
Review By [(Recent Donor)curiouslywombat] • Date [20 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Why This Short, Coarse, Average-Looking Mortal?" from (Recent Donor)curiouslywombat
Review:
Probably not a good idea to ask me about possible pairings and plots - you know I have a soft spot for the twins, and for Dawn, so I'd be bound to suggest that the three of them get whatever they want...!
Comments from author:
haha... I figured you would say that :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)curiouslywombat] • Date [1 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Why This Short, Coarse, Average-Looking Mortal?" from Swordstress
Review:
I think that Elohir doesn't realize just how deep Elladan's bond with Sofia is. I suspect Elohir will force himself to stay away from Sofia, and consequently will start to fade. Only then will Elohir realize it wasn't wise for him to push Elohir away from Sofia. But that's just my guess. :)
Comments from author:
Well, I don't want to give anything away but you are definitely correct on Elrohir not understanding it. After all, he doesn't even understand the Arwen/Aragorn thing, but is happy for them since he loves them both. If Aragorn had not grown up with the twins it would have been a much different story.

I love, by the way, that you comment at each chapter! You always make my day :)
Review By [Swordstress] • Date [25 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Elven Inquisition, Parte Dos" from Swordstress
Review:
Ooo--Elohir's resolve to keep a distance between Dawn and him is weakening. Yay!

Two characters, eh?

Buffy and Xander.
Comments from author:
Hey Swordstress! Thanks for responding; it's much appreciated.

*Teehee* Yay indeed :)

The Buffster and Xand, huh? Hmmm... Nice! Thanks!
Review By [Swordstress] • Date [24 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Elven Inquisition, Parte Dos" from MistofRainbows
Review:
Let's see, to annoy everyone send Xander and Giles so Giles can pick up some magic :) Or well Faith and Giles or Faith and Xander is good :)
Comments from author:
Ooooh, yes annoying people is definitely part of my plan! Mwahaahaha. Faith is always one of my fav, but then again I haven't shown any Xander or Giles face time... Thanks!
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [23 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Elven Inquisition, Parte Uno" from namegoeshere
Review:
I love Sofia/Elladan and Dawn/Elrohir. But I must admit I am waiting on the edge of my seat waiting for the truth about Dawn's origin to come out.
Comments from author:
Yay! I'm glad you likey :)

The truth about Dawn's origin... Damn chica, its gonna be good! It may be a while for it to fully come out but you'll get there eventually!

I will tell ya this: When Dawn finds out she'll definitely *not* be a happy witch for a major stereotypical reason in the Summers clan style.
Review By [namegoeshere] • Date [21 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Elven Inquisition, Parte Uno" from Swordstress
Review:
Loved the interaction between Haldir and Vi--when he imitated Sofia. It was hilarious. I'm also liking the attraction building between Dawn and Elohir. Especially glad that he wasn't angry for her outing him.

Favorite pairs? In order:

1. Sofia/Elladan
2. Dawn/Elohir
3. Vi/Amras

Don't like Sofia and Eric for obvious reasons. Though I do like his character. I just hope he gets his own happy ending that doesn't involve breaking up Sofia and Elladan. :)
Comments from author:
Aw, Swordstress, you are so fun :D I'm glad you liked the Haldr/Vi bit. Haldir is one of my favorite characters to write and I am still trying to decide what will be happening to him as we get closer to the story's conclusion... although I do think I'm gonna do something extremely funny about 3 chapters from now *mischieveous grin* Ohhhh yes, you will fall off your computer chair laughing haha.
Dawn & Elrohir are fun, aren't they? :) Next chapter we'll see things through Elrohir's eyes a bit.

As for Erik/Sofia/Elladan... Well... Time will only tell :)
Review By [Swordstress] • Date [21 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cute, Cuddly, & Pokey Like a Hedgehog" from draconis
Review:
Re: title change? Please...no.

It serves no useful purpose at this point in time, and to be honest it's hackneyed. I think of that title and Doris Day pops into my head...not a Slayer and definitely not magic, mythos, nor masses of mOrcs. (sorry, got carried away with the alliteration...but now you're thinking of silly aliens* aren't ya? See my point?)


*If you're into retro TV
Que Sera, Sera (youtube, watch?v=6rcIP9SdKmQ )
Mork and Mindy (youtube, watch?v=tRj1GbwxtsA )
Comments from author:
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh THANK YOU draconis! I had a friend who was pressuring me to do the title change because it is not fun but I was thinking 140,000+ words into the story would be kinda weird. Haha... Yeah, gotcha, definitely not the best title either... silly aliens are no good.

LOVED Mork & Mindy when I was a kid. Man, Nick at Nite was the best! Never heard of Que Sera, Sera... I'll haveta check that out.

Major thanks chica!
Review By [draconis] • Date [21 Dec 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Elven Inquisition, Parte Uno" from MistofRainbows
Review:
Go with Sofia and the demon, the elf is a jealous nut case, though the other way around would be amusing as well in order to mess with the self appointed bigot gods. Honestly just have her date both, split her time in half and screw them both, be fun.

Should find someone better for Dawn, because honestly whiner, doesn't even begin to describe him.

Go vi and the random mortal.
Comments from author:
MistofRainbows~ Thanks for the feedback :) It is much appreciated. I can suddenly see many interesting scenarios with her seeing both tasty men haha.
Hmm... Interesting note on Elrohir... *ponders*
And I think Vi is gonna get some happiness :)
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [21 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Deck the Halls with Evil Entrails" from (Recent Donor)curiouslywombat
Review:
Just caught up in a quiet moment from off-line life. I have been leaving this to reward myself when I had got a whole lot of things done! An excellent reunion - just as you would expect things to go at this point! I'm still rooting for Elladan though...
Comments from author:
Aw, thanks love for considering this a reward:) It's definitely good to have some quiet off-line life. I've been kinda taking a break from writing and reading for a bit~ bunch of familia stuff with the holidays near. Well, I'm also taking a break b/c I'm kinda stuck on how the next few chapters will play out... Hopefully there'll be an update soon.
But of course, please do not take after me because I need my Key fix! haha.

Glad you liked the reunion... And Elladan certainly appreciates the support :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)curiouslywombat] • Date [12 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Elves Certainly Do Not Lurk" from namegoeshere
Review:
I just found your story and really like it. I love Dawn, she is by far my fav. I usually hate OC but your is pretty good. I'll be waiting for more. Wink::
Comments from author:
Welcome namegoeshere! I always love having a new reader :D Thank you for the comment; I'm glad to hear you are enjoying it so far. And I'm super glad you like my OC! She is rather likeable ;) No, really, I wanted to ensure she came out 3-dimensonal and had a personality of her own so I am happy to hear the positive feedback.

Have a great day!
Review By [namegoeshere] • Date [2 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Elves Certainly Do Not Lurk" from Swordstress
Review:
Ah, poor Damien! Broken hearts all around! Also, I'm enjoying the tension between Elohir and Dawn... Someone should tell him that it's futile to resist the lure of a Summers girl.
Comments from author:
haha! Yes, I'm enjoying writing the Elrohir and Dawn scenes :D Tension is fun... lol... futile to resist the lure of a Summers girl; thou art funny.
Review By [Swordstress] • Date [1 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Everything Has to Result in Physical Violence…" from Swordstress
Review:
Oh no, it's Damien, isn't it? That's why Sofia is so outraged. Poor Sofia--just she's finally getting over her loss. And poor Elladan. Sigh. Is it too much to hope that Dawn's spell didn't work?
Comments from author:
... Wait & see my friend! I'll be posting the next chapter soon :)
Review By [Swordstress] • Date [30 Nov 09] • Not Rated
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