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Review of chapter "Thus the hunters of the night became the hunted" from IrFane
Review:
Good story.
Review By [IrFane] • Date [14 Oct 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And the candle looked at the stars and whimpered" from DragonBard
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Would have liked it better if it hadn't been something Buffy had actually done.

If you'd wanted to cause her to blame herself, make it more an accident. Say she realizes Xander lied and accuses him which causes him to fall into the portal, or a friendly fire incident where she thought it was Angelus she was sending, but Xander got in the way... or something similar in nature.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [31 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Thus the hunters of the night became the hunted" from lordamnesia
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Love the setup here! What pairing are you thinking of, and that's a very interesting twist with Dawn being Xander's sister. Keep up the great work!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [3 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thus the hunters of the night became the hunted" from Shadestar
Review:
headache for the little troll. What will Xander be able to build? Great story so far.
Review By [Shadestar] • Date [19 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thus the hunters of the night became the hunted" from lillyb
Review:
The ideas are good and the story is very creative I will track this story just because I want to know what happens next. That being said... wow that was hard to follow. good for you for writing this story and I am impressed that you got it all in print, but you could use a good editor and a few betas. Also the story is so rushed i feel like i just ran a marathon after reading it. And it jumps around so much its easy to louse track. I would love for you to go back to the beginning and work it over, it could be so good with a little polish. If I can help let me know. I can see how hard you have worked on this and that's part of the problem it seems like you need to simplify it a lot. when you reed a good story it should feel almost effortless, like you can see the events unfolding and there were moments in this story like that so don't give up.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [2 Jul 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thus the hunters of the night became the hunted" from marcus
Review:
I have enjoyed this. Never seen a cross over with Starcraft before and look forward to seeing what you will do with this.
Review By [marcus] • Date [2 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thus the hunters of the night became the hunted" from Bobboky
Review:
love it
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Thus the hunters of the night became the hunted" from djhardim
Review:
Slayer's Rule #1 - Your weapons are MINE. Hand them over.

I think that destroying the demon bars was a mistake. Willys was a source of information.
Comments from author:
he just got back he wants the demons in fear, but he is not perfect he will make mistakes. Personaly I think not telling Giles he is back is a big mistake but Xander is only human.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [2 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thus the hunters of the night became the hunted" from eriktheviking
Review:
Well written characterizations causing fun and havoc. Thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [2 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thus the hunters of the night became the hunted" from ender
Review:
great start I like the way this is going so keep it up pleas yore now on my favorites list lol. Now that Xander is back in Sunnydale, when will he start setting up a base with protoss and earth tech? I'm real looking forward to a Xander vs Wilkins III. well till the next chapter
Comments from author:
not going to hapen he only has enough material to make spare parts for his armor and maintain his equipment for his lifetime plus some extra he will be getting suplies but that is after the mayor is done with a long time before that issue is addresed. But don't worry I have plans :)
Review By [ender] • Date [2 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Thus the hunters of the night became the hunted" from rothos
Review:
Good, plausible too for the series. So what did you think of Blizzard's SC2 April Fools prank?
Review By [rothos] • Date [2 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And so lost child returned to the tainted land" from Hoyt
Review:
The last chapter was weird.

Scrap it.
Review By [Hoyt] • Date [30 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And so lost child returned to the tainted land" from KingHenrytheV
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Cute. It feels like the introduction is over, and the story is finally about to begin. I look forward to what the author has in mind.
Review By [KingHenrytheV] • Date [29 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And so lost child returned to the tainted land" from Toras
Review:
An interesting story so far. Now that Xander is back in Sunnydale, I can't wait to see how the other scoobies react to the changes in him. I would imagine that they are in for a number of surpises.
Review By [Toras] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And so lost child returned to the tainted land" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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