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Review of chapter "Buffy's Diary" from ecifrog
Review:
Great story! Interesting seeing Buffy and Teal'c together
Comments from author:
I'm guessing that you read 'Doing What Comes Naturally' by DeepBlueJoy and found out there were a couple other Teal'c/Buffy stories out there and saw mine. Whatever the reason, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Personally, I think 'Teal'c's Story' is a bit better - mostly because it explains why the age difference isn't that important. Course if you're just looking to see Angel look like a dope, this is the better of the two. The differences between them make for an intriguing concept. They *are* the definition of opposites attract. You know, except for them both being kick a** warriors.
Review By [ecifrog] • Date [18 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy's Diary" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
I really enjoyed this. It's also inspired me to write my own Teal'c/Buffy story... you're just so inspirational today. grin.

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Comments from author:
I saw your story and am reading it right now. Glad it inspired you.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [12 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy's Diary" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Bread's song "Diary" was the perfect song to illustrate what was going on, even though I hate the song to pieces (I'm a terrible sap and the song always makes me sad). Nicely done, thank you for sharing this.
Comments from author:
I know what you're saying, there's music I only listen to when I'm in a 'blue' mood, not necessarily depressed, but not in the mood for peppy.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [27 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy's Diary" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
There are not a lot of Buffy Teal's stories. As in I think I have read two counting this one. I am so glad you are writing a series on this. Maybe if I ever finish some of my stories I will try out the pairing. I don't think it will work out that well with my Gift of a Family story though the reaction from Jack to that would be SO very tempting. LOL

I am planning on having her date around a little once she gets to Colorado and not having one set pairing...at least for a while.

hmm. Tempting.

I really loved how Angel thought she was talking about him in her diary. I am looking forward to reading the next one.
Comments from author:
I like you, you seem to be as much of a Buffy fan as me. I don't mind the occasional story about other characters, but she will always be my top choice.

You can thank those that didn't like an older guy/Jaffa with an underage girl for the need to make this a series.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [27 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy's Diary" from Aeryn
Review:
Really enjoyed this.
Comments from author:
Glad to hear it.
Review By [Aeryn] • Date [26 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy's Diary" from spk
Review:
LOVED it! I rarely give a "10", but I definitely thought this story deserved it for the way you answered the challenge and yet kept the story very believable. I love that it was Buffy-centric, yet from Angel's pov. I adore the idea of a Buffy/Teal'c pairing. Wish there would be more. :D
Comments from author:
Well, there is now a companion piece titled 'Teal'c's Story' to show it from the other side and explain some things that concern some people.
Review By [spk] • Date [25 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy's Diary" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Love the irony of Angel reading about Buffy's feelings for Teal'c and thinking they refer to him, at first.

It's a trifle difficult to buy the idea of the rest of SG1 (or General Hammond, for that matter) being okay with 80-year-old (though still definitely in his prime!) Teal'c being in any way involved with a barely legal, just-turned-17-years-old Buffy, or with a 17-year-old working even part time at the SGC, in spite of her super powers. But oh, it would have been nice if things HAD been able to work out that way.

And kudos for pairing Joyce with Daniel as a future romantic interest!
Comments from author:
Yeah, I wrote out a companion piece that I'm polishing up explaining why it MIGHT be okay. As far as her 'work' - part of it is cover because the Sunnydale group won't know about the Stargate and the extraterrestial aspect so they'll just think that this is a group of demon fighters (a good version of the Initiative minus the experimenting and building killer demon/human/cyborgs). The other part is until she is old enough, she'll just train on base with the teams to increase their ability to fight stronger opponents in hand-to-hand.

I had to come up with a reason why Joyce wouldn't mind moving beyond protecting her daughter. Not that she'd move for a man or anything, but seriously...given her choices on a Hellmouth, who wouldn't choose the tasty Dr. Jackson? And between him and Jack, Daniel seems more her type - at least her adult-self type. Maybe band candy Joyce would prefer Jack but grown-up Joyce strikes me as a sexy intellectual type.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [25 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy's Diary" from spring
Review:
Wonderful.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [spring] • Date [25 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy's Diary" from RippersGirl
Review:
Angel reading her diary & being completely wrong is very amusing. The only thing that I really have an issue with is Buffy's only 16 when she meets Teal'c and even being a Slayer, I highly doubt Teal'c would show an interest in someone that young. And even then, I doubt the rest of SG-1 would be supportive of him even contemplating a relationship with someone who was underage.
Comments from author:
I agree about the underage thing, but the same SHOULD have applied to Angel, don't you think? At least in my story, Teal'c likes her because she's a warrior first. Maybe I'll need to do a companion piece from his POV to clarify his and SG-1's reasons for being okay with the relationship. Buffy wouldn't really be privy to that.

Plus, in my mind, right now there is just the attraction between them, they haven't ACTED on it yet. I don't know about Jaffa customs so I don't know how long a courtship would last. Before you say anything, his wife and son don't exist. That would make it AU SG-1 also, but I think it would be dishonorable for him to be involved with Buffy unless it was a later season and I like the early season scenario better.
Review By [RippersGirl] • Date [25 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy's Diary" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent work. You actually made me feel sorry for Angel and I hate Angel. Lol!
Comments from author:
I didn't mean it as sympathetic for him, more as laughing at his expense. Guess that didn't translate from my brain though.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [25 Feb 09] • Not Rated
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