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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Infinix
Like others I got the feeling of disjointed and confusing, along with a feeling like this is almost a prologue to an epic story that is just waiting to be told.

Still I think you conveyed the emotions and ideas you were aiming for so I have to give you a congratulatory round of applause.
Comments from author:
Thank you. This actually *is* the beginning of a series, though it's going to be a little while on the update, as I'm not quite satisfied with it yet. I perposely left some of the loose ends untied for just that reason. I'm glad, too, that I conveyed the emotions well enough; though I spoke with the characters' voices in my mind, I wasn't certain that that would come across. Thank you very much, and thank you also for reviewing.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [1 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)kcl
There are parts of this that I find very interesting, but it's just too disjoint and choppy for me. I tried reading it after there were four chapters available, but gave it up somewhere in chapter three. Perhaps I'll look at it again when its further along or finished. Thanks anyway!
Review By [(Current Donor)kcl] • Date [1 Mar 09] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Stefbuddie
Awesome story:)
Review By [Stefbuddie] • Date [28 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from ladyfiana
The skipping around is a little confusing but I get the feeling you want it that way. Still it is interesting so I hope you write more soon.
Review By [ladyfiana] • Date [28 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from RocksandGlass
Disjointed and confusing, yet oddly compelling. Don't take the adjectives as criticism, rather as statement of fact of how I've found the story so far, I'm sure it's supposed to be like that to an extent. regardless, I am intrigued and look forward to reading more.
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [28 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Ghostrider
Interesting start. A little disjointed, just showing flashes and jumping around but you've gotten my attention. So, this is after Buffy's jump? It seems like Willow's been meddling with their minds much earlier, then.

You've got my attention.
Comments from author:
Thank you. It's actually supposed to be disjointed so that people aren't *exactly* sure about everything, although I hope that everyone has some clue. Yes, this is set after Buffy's jump, and Willow has started a lot earlier. It's the butterfly effect and that's all I'll say at this point; something changed.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [28 Feb 09] • Not Rated
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