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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MBB
Review:
Lol, funny fic, and a creative crossover.
I really think Angel should have had different sorts of annoying/weird assistants very week.
In particularly, I missed the bureaucratic type like Humprey Appleby (Yes Minister)
But this blond type type is a favorite too.

And about saving blond Bimbo's, it was already the second one. (first one Harmony of course). But yes, I could really hear Cordelia saying something like that. (especially about Buffy ;-) )

I also liked your Xander-Vi series.
Comments from author:
I agree that the administrative assistant pool was an under-utilized aspect of the show, although Harmony did have a few choice bits (hey, I made a punny), particularly in 'Harm's Way.' Someone could write a series about all the people that Angel goes through before Harmony got the job. I leave that up for someone else, though. I'm still trying to finish off the first arc of my 5th Element crossover.

And Xander/Vi shall not be undersold (except by Liz Marcs, who pens Vi as a really nasty off-screen villain in "Behold Little Padawan"...still, definitely worth the read).
Review By [MBB] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AngelBlack
Review:
Cordy and 'saving the world one bimbo at a time'
That line was as exquisite as bacardi with lime!

Not to mention the 'oh I read People all the time!'
Witticisms like this are surely what made this fic shine!

And the end with Harmony was hilarious
[as the idea of the two blondes togethor was ridiculous]

All and all I'd like to commend you on a great, humorous fic
And now this review shall end as I 'click'!
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for the thoughtful (and carefully coupleted) review. This was WAY better than one of those credit cards that pays you back; quality reviews get me fired up to work on more (and longer) fics.
Review By [AngelBlack] • Date [14 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
Review:
Nice fun story - I'd have liked it to be longer. I think there's an error, however:

(quote)it’s disturbing the wa of my whole department.(end quote)

Unless 'wa' is an obscure Feng Shui term you've missed at least part of a word out there.


Addition: Ah, so my guess was almost right although in the wrong language. I did search for the term, as I couldn't think of anything that 'wa' could have been a typo for, but couldn't find anything. I know quite a lot of Japanese terms but only in connection with martial arts; it never occurred to me to try searching in Japanese.
Comments from author:
No error--went back and italicized the term. I didn't reflect upon the fact that people might consider it an obscure reference =( I apologize for the brevity of the piece. I sat on this story for over a month, aware that people would want more details fleshed out, but apparently my muse is partying in Cancun.
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [1 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Tjack
Review:
God help me I think I want more....
What was the song she sang?
And VERY loosely translated, "Wa" is a Japanese word that refers to the peace & harmony (no pun intended) within a group.
Comments from author:
The song is from "Legally Blonde: the Musical" (song player at the bottom of the lyrics) http://www.allmusicals.com/lyrics/legallyblonde/findmyway.htm
I accidentally found it when I was looking for dialogue clips for the movie.
Review By [Tjack] • Date [28 Feb 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ReferenceGoddess
Review:
Chortle, snort.

If you are following the comic book season 8 of Buffy, does this mean Elle will be Harmony's manager?

Oh, and "one blonde bimbo at a time" - priceless.
Comments from author:
I haven't followed the comics at all, but that definitely sounds plausible. Can you imagine the trouble those two would get into?
Review By [ReferenceGoddess] • Date [28 Feb 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)athenewolfe
Review:
cute!
Review By [(Past Donor)athenewolfe] • Date [28 Feb 09] • Not Rated
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