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Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Rune
Review:
I'd rate you higher but you titled this "Harmony's Halloween Choices" and in this one there is a distinct lack of Harmony for most of the fic. The bit with Warren is funny, and it seems you are giving Cordy a wakeup call. So its a good fic but please bring it back to focus on the title character.

I've been reading the series and I'll go back and comment on each sometime. Thanks for writing it. :)
Review By [Rune] • Date [11 Aug 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Tjin
Review:
Very interesting, one point... a Victorian era lady would maintain herself on the left side of her escort so as not to be in the way should he need to draw blade or pistol...

Just a point... other then that... i was happy Warren got what was coming to him.

-Tjin
Comments from author:
The gown that turned Buffy into a noblewoman with no memories of the Slayer isn't dated in canon (or at least I don't remember this), but the fanfiction consensus is that it's earlier than the Victorian era, so that's how I wrote it. Though, even if Madelaine knew the proper side to walk, at that point of the story Willow was there, and there was no way the supersitious girl would come any closer if it could be helped to that redhaired ghost.

Thanks for all your reading and reviews!
Review By [Tjin] • Date [9 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Bobboky
Review:
excellent
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [4 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from TheMaskedLurker
Review:
--,'{@

Whoa! Major badness
For all sides, sparing no one.
Trip to the dark side.

-[ Amputations, scarring, burns, deaths; that's a lot of grief being spread. For both the heroes and the villains. Hope this story doesn't result in a Bad End. That would certainly be different, but it would be depressing. ]-
Review By [TheMaskedLurker] • Date [3 May 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from CPTSkip
Review:
This is such a wonderful story. You entertain me by telling a neat story. Nice job with all the characters, even the 'bad' ones. Your Cordy is both true to canon and quite charming in her own twisted way. But what a frakking cliffhanger! I hope the Star Fleet dudes get there in time with their Big Shopping Cart Phasers. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [27 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Mcspender
Review:
Heeell Yeaah, let's make seafood the hard way!!!!.
See ya!!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from TheMaskedLurker
Review:
--,'{@

Things don't look so good
For the water-themed lovebirds.
Wonder what you'll do.
Review By [TheMaskedLurker] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from CPTSkip
Review:
Well, aloha to Angel the Dusty. I think the idea of a Buffy/Jonathan pairing is both unusual and interesting. Your story makes me laugh a lot and yet you have some nice action scenes. I look forward to more fun. But where is Giles? And how much of the Helloween personalities will remain? And who will be the lucky person to dust-off Spike this time?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Sandi
Review:
This is very interesting. Angel dead. Jonathon rescuing Buffy. Xander's perceptions of Warren. So many things can change from these beginnings. Please continue this. It could be epic.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [30 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Richardthrnnsx
Review:
This is pure genius, how do you think them up.

100/10. Thanks for sharing
Review By [Richardthrnnsx] • Date [16 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CPTSkip
Review:
Madison/Harmony is wearing a top? Bummer, Acquadude. Lol! Interesting and logical ideas about undersea vamps. But where is Bruce the Shark when you really need him? Great story and I look forward to more. I wonder if Harm will be able to transform back into a Madison type mermaid once the spell is broken? And what has happened to Willow and Buffy back in Sunnyhell? I hope they chose different costumes or Buffy and possible Cordy are toast. Or maybe Cordy bought her costume or part of her costume at Ethan's and she turned into a werepanther and saved the day. Lol!
Comments from author:
I got the idea of underwater vampires from when Alan Moore was doing the coolest run of Swamp Thing and he put those blood-drinkers at the bottom of a lake.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [3 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Fyrloche
Review:
Good work, as usual. From your description of a horta, you must be a Diane Duane fan. She's about the only author that I've read that describes the Horta in that fashion. I've been thinking about the Kirk/Orion slave girl thing. Kirk would give her freedom. Of course, she would be grateful and swear eternal service to him. (Kinda defeats the purpose of freeing her, doesn't it.) Then follows the obligatory comments like : "But, Master..." "I'm not your master!" *girl crying* "Master is displeased with me!" (Oh, God. I just had a Tony/Genie moment.) Anyway, this series that you have come up with is too funny. Keep it up.
Comments from author:
You were right about the description coming from Diane Duane. She's one of my favorite Star Trek authors.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [3 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CPTSkip
Review:
I so hope Psycho Warren runs into and gets eaten by a demon that likes to start by biting off its victims' feet and munching upwards. Nice interplay among the Scoobies. I look forward to more.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [2 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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