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Review of chapter "Life Changing" from starfire
Review:
ohh I CAN'T WAIT for an update this is awesome ..
Review By [starfire] • Date [3 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Life Changing" from Zyanadryn
Review:
u ever going to finish? its a good story.
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It All Seemed Like A Good Idea At the Time" from ConDaMon
Review:
great so far but update soon please
Review By [ConDaMon] • Date [11 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Life Changing" from GundumM
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liking it so far.
Review By [GundumM] • Date [31 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life Changing" from Gideon
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You have provided a good balance with a couple of good fun chapters and then a serious one. Joyce does seem to be aware of the difficulties Dawn would face at school due to her fairy wings. Still her pop out claws should help to keep the bullies away! Or maybe it is time to consider home schooling for the whole bunch.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [10 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Life Changing" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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nice story so far and poor Joyce, that was a lot to take in
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [12 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It All Seemed Like A Good Idea At the Time" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
interesting start and I like the mixed costumes :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [16 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It All Seemed Like A Good Idea At the Time" from anpu
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THE ENTIRE STORY IS INTELLIGENT, HILARIOUS, AND GENUINELY FUNNY.
Review By [anpu] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Life Changing" from CPTSkip
Review:
Your first three chapters were some of the funniest stuff I've read. Now in this update the fun and games are over and we are feeling Joyce's fear and pain. I hope the Scoobies can eventually make her feel better about the situation "her" kids are in. Very nice job with Joyce's character and voice. I almost hope that Ethan has been evaporated because I don't think good things would happen to him if Joyce ever gets her hands on him. I think your story is wonderful and I can't wait for more.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [20 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life Changing" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [20 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life Changing" from MavenAlysse
Review:
Holy Moly!

Wow!

Definitely looking forward to reading more.

Thanks for sharing!

-MavenAlysse
Review By [MavenAlysse] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life Changing" from tremerid
Review:
Even if a previous reviewer claims it doesn't work, I think this is a great story. I thought so when you first posted it up, and I still think so after this latest chapter.

My favorite scenes involved Xander and Morgan at the school, and the "Verily!" line later on lol. I wonder how things will change with Xander and the others. How will he cope with his new appearance? How will Morgan and Dawn cope with their own changes? Will they meet any other interesting people?

The writing is well thought out, and structured in such a way that after the first few paragraphs one tends to forget that they are reading. In my case, this only happens with stories I really enjoy. It is a very difficult thing for an author to manage, drawing someone into their imagery this way.

Please keep up the great work.

Regards,

--Tremerid
Review By [tremerid] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Life Changing" from Ben
Review:
The math doesn't add up.

Assuming the screwdriver that the Monks retroactively inserted her into reality as Buffy's sister, she would stil have only been ten years old during the events of Halloween.
Comments from author:
i beg to differ, when Dawn first turned up, she was fifteen...maybe fourteen. So it could be argued that she would have turned up that age no matter when she was 'retroactively screwed in'.

Either way, i explained this at the start.

Sorry you missed the memo.
Review By [Ben] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It All Seemed Like A Good Idea At the Time" from Addlcove
Review:
Fantastic story, please do update soon.

looking forward to seeing what kinda trouble the trio will get into.
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [5 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Right Senseless Tit" from lordamnesia
Review:
Great start to a Halloween change story. Keep up the good work!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [17 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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