I was not expecting the scourge to show up here. Then again, Anakin is proving to be a powerful threat to the forces of evil. I also really enjoyed your intro of Faith. Fit with her character perfectly.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

.....I usualy don't go for this kind of story. While I'm a huge fan of the Star Trek verse, I don't much like Vader. And someone showing up and teaching Xander the force ect ect usualy doesn't sound very good. Now that I've said all that, I like your story. Its following in a believeable way and your making it fun.

I can't wait to read more, see what happens next. Buffy got taken to a ship? Are they not demons but aliens?

Xander getting to back talk both Buffy & Faith all in the same night? Very cool. No big I'm so great cuz I did this speech, but Xander defending his postion because hes been doing it for years. It makes sence, and I liked how it turned out.

Willow taking her friends side over Buffy's even more. So do update soon.

Are they close to constructing lightsabers?



): )

An interesting story. I look forward to more.

Clean scripting and a great plotline. Keep it up!

Glad to see you made it back from deployment ok, and very happy to see another part to this story. Hope to read more.

That was a fantastic update and one that was much anticipated. Great work and I look forward to more.

I love the way you portrayed Faith, as well as Buffy's foibles and your version of the Scourge.

In the near future, I would love to see the Chosen Two kicking ass and perhaps, even, indulging in what was so transparent in the show- some serious sexual tension and perhaps even more (at least Faith seemed to have a serious crush on Buffy before things went down hill) Would be an interesting twist if the slayers become the 'lesbians' of the group, with willow still with Oz and Xander alone with his Master Luke?

Irregardless of my relationship musing, your presentation of a new, competant big bad in the form of the scourge is awesome and i truly look forward to many more badass fights.

It's been so long since I last read an update I had to read the whole story from scratch again. Thanks a lot for wasting a whole evening! ;)

It's great to see you are back and writing. I was hoping for a while that this story hadn't drifted off to die with a whimper. Instead you're back with a bang. Good chapter, nice intro of Faith to the group. Hope to see more soon.

Welcome back and I'm glad to see this story hasn't been abandoned. Looking forward to the next update.

Welcome back dude =)!!.
Excellent chapter, and well, Buffy brougth this mess on herself. By trying to sideline her friends, she ran out of friends in a very critical moment, let's see if Anakin can teacher her a few lessons about that particular mistake.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.

This is good fic.

Welcome back! Glad to see you continuing this excellent story.

This is a very well written story. Plot devices seem to be well used, character development is at least on par with canon, and crossover elements are used to great benefit to the overall story. I expect you didn't intend initially to write in the Jurgavn as a major antagonist, but it's turned out very well-- I certainly want to see more, as I suspect most of the readership does...

So how do you intend the rest of the Scoobies to figure out Skywalker's terrible secret? It would seem Xander already has a hint of his dark history. And Buffy's Slayer dream with Angelus, the Kurgan and Vader was very well writtwn indeed; the delivery had a lot of impact behind it, I expected Buffy to wake up either screaming or choking!

You have also set the stage for this story to expand and grow by leaps and bounds. Anakin, Xander and Oz are the foundation of the new Jedi Order on Earth, and Anakin's new Jedi Foundation endowment is the key to bridging the gap between Earth and Coruscant; perhaps Anakin may find a way home this way, but would that be right for the story?

Well done, and please pick this up again soon, you've left this alone too long!

This story is not dead. I deployed throughout much of 2011 and was so busy I had no time to get to it. I got back in mid june and its taken me this long to get back into writting. Fortunately I forward wrote a few chapters. I'll be posting them soon and get back to writting this fic. Your review helped me realize how much time had passed. And its unaceptable that this story has gone this long without an update. expect one soon.

I have really enjoyed this story. I hope that you continue with this. Nice characterization. Keep up the good work.

what a wonderful story. I love where it is headed and what you're doing with it. I am truly curious as to if you're going to 'save' faith from herself and truly bring her into the scoobies like she should have from the beginning. Additionally, I am curious as to how far into the scoobie story you're planning on going (ie ending it around season 3 or if you're going to at least go into season 4.) It would be interesting to see your perspective on Willow realizing her true sexuality (and bringing Tara into the group) and especially the far more advanced militaristic scoobies dealing with the Initiative - especially when both Xander and Anakin should be able to sense them - perhaps even now even if you don't go into college- because they were setting up the secret base and were obviously well organized by the time we see them in the beginning of season 4.
I just truly hope that you're going to finish this fic because you've set up several major big-bads and I don't see this fic ending any time soon and in fact has huge potential for going on forever :/


update please