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Review of chapter "Chapter 11: The Slayers" from (Current Donor)KColl
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Good on Xander for giving Princess Buffy a much-needed reality check.
Review By [(Current Donor)KColl] • Date [6 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8 part 3 The Dead Mans Party" from (Current Donor)KColl
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Buffy the victim. Buffy the one whose feelings matter. Yep, she's in char. What a brat.
Review By [(Current Donor)KColl] • Date [6 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 Ripples" from (Current Donor)KColl
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The cow gene runs deep in the Summers line, yes.
Review By [(Current Donor)KColl] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12 Looks like a Rescue...kinda" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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nice story so far and I guess that was a Sith Holocorn or something like that Lindsey just found.
tx for sharing
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [26 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12 Looks like a Rescue...kinda" from Kalliza
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Just found this story, and I like it. I particularly like that you're not making Anakin's journey to the Light Side easy, and that you're having Xander struggling with it. I find it difficult to believe that Anakin would have said "you'll know it" when asked how to recognize the Dark Side, because of all people I't think Anni could far too easily understand how it can be difficult to recognize. I get the impression Xander hasn't shared his brushes with blind fury-induced madness with Anakin, or else I believe warning bells would have been *screaming*.

Anyway, really looking forward to seeing where this goes. Please update soon!
Review By [Kalliza] • Date [28 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Welcome to Sunnyhell." from Compston
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Interesting story. So far the first two chapters have pecked my interest. It appears well thought out and the writing is pretty good...
Review By [Compston] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12 Looks like a Rescue...kinda" from Piterio
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This is a great story. I began reading it recently but I can already say that in a way it's even better than Jedi Harris and it's sequel Terran Jedi. They are really good, but your add some moment that I consider were missed in them. So thanks for this story, cause I'm really glad I could read it. I look forward to the next chapter of it, cause relationship between Xander and Faith is one of my favorite ships. Again thanks, Good Luck and Happy New Year.
Review By [Piterio] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Opening Moves" from draconis
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Fun story. Looking forward to reading the rest of it.

Just to let yuu know...good job on the "hidden" Whedon Firefly/Serenity references! Each discovery tweaks just a bit more fun into the story.

Just thought I'd mention that unless I missed some item of acknowledgment within the story, and it seems none of the other reviewers to date have pointed this out...I appreciated spotting the multiple subtle references to Whedon's Firefly/Serenity in what I've read so far...
"Serenity Valley" of course, browncoats, isolated 'firefly' sighting, and of course the ever popular (amended) warning, “If you so much as put a scratch on my car I will relentlessly hunt you down and kill you with my brain.”, to name a few. I know there are others that I don't remember quite at the moment due to pain meds but I'm hoping I haven't found the last of them. The environments and situations you specifically developed to include them in normal conversation clearly took some thought. It's just not as simple as someone being attacked by a thuggish weapon and sex-obsessed demon that just happened to be named Jane...right?

I suppose I'll have to keep reading to find out if 'Napkin can help keep X&C's relationship intact after the empathic powers disclosure, and to find out if it's deemed philosophically 'bad' or 'good'. I don't think the word 'manipulation' is the proper argument choice here, and X should steer it toward the word 'adaptation'. It's more accurate as it more closely resembles the audible, verbal, and numerous physical cues people share and adapt to while engaged in intimate activities, and how they interact and adapt afterwards. I'm tending to assessing as 'good' as C never lost her Free Will, and X never upped-things to invasive. Although...relationship-wise it would have been much smarter for X to have discussed the 'enhanced adaptability/responsiveness' to cues with C prior to his acting on them. And...if that meant waiting on Skywalker's approval vis-a-vis the Force capability and training then he'd just have to consider it part of his training to wait.
Review By [draconis] • Date [19 Oct 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12 Looks like a Rescue...kinda" from Bobboky
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good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [18 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12 Looks like a Rescue...kinda" from deusexsububi
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Fantastic work on this story. please post more soon.

Also, your Buffy was hilarious.
Review By [deusexsububi] • Date [17 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: The Slayers" from madamssaiyan
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Welcome Back. I really enjoyed this story and always thought it was abandoned. Thank you so much for all your time and effort.
I hate that Xander and cordy broke up as I always thought they were a great couple.. especial if xander grows a brain like he has in your story.

Thanks again
Review By [madamssaiyan] • Date [17 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12 Looks like a Rescue...kinda" from sdavidm
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Nicely done. I don't think Xander has any right to be so pissed at Buffy bringing up Jesse. He's said plenty more hurtful things to her in the past. A minor nitpick in an otherwise well written story. I hope you update soon!
Review By [sdavidm] • Date [17 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12 Looks like a Rescue...kinda" from aeraveil
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They're probably going through the Dagobah version of training.
Review By [aeraveil] • Date [16 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6. Jedi 101" from sdavidm
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Well done so far. The writing is good, with only a few typos here and there. I'm glad you're having Anakin struggle with his dark tendencies even now. Much more realistic. I think the Scoobies' training is progressing a bit too quickly however. After two weeks, most people will have just learned enough to throw a proper punch. Sparring is still beyond them.

Just a heads up, the sate in the first training session in this chapter is June 31st, and the one right after is June 15th. I think perhaps you meant May?
Review By [sdavidm] • Date [16 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12 Looks like a Rescue...kinda" from EroSlackerMicha
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nice to see this again. keep up the good work
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [16 Oct 13] • Not Rated
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